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Quote fthmdg Replybullet Topic: Skatebored WIP
    Posted: 09 September 2006 at 10:09am



I wanted to make sure the line art looked good before i colored it.
Any c&c would be good. =]

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made the top of the deck. Started texturing the griptape( top right )

Finished the texturing of the griptape, and colored the skrews.

new griptape idea? i think its too light, but im not sure. Attempted metal texture on trucks.

Finished griptape, colored deck, fixed wheels



Edited by fthmdg - 10 September 2006 at 10:31am
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Quote Skull Replybullet Posted: 09 September 2006 at 11:06am
Shape seems fine to me, nicely done. I think this could be a pretty cool community collab.
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Quote fthmdg Replybullet Posted: 09 September 2006 at 11:33am
ya.. that'd b cool hehe
so the shape and everything looks right?
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Quote Monkey 'o Doom Replybullet Posted: 09 September 2006 at 12:30pm
I think that you should up the contrast for the texture; I had no clue what you meant until I stared at it for a few minutes. Also, once you do the metal bits, be sure to get rid of the outlines and make it a nice metal texture.

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Quote Ensellitis Replybullet Posted: 09 September 2006 at 1:27pm
this is already a collab, just do some digging through the old posts...

lineart looks spot on

EDIT: here it is


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Quote Skull Replybullet Posted: 09 September 2006 at 1:35pm
Woww... that was one sweet collab. And before my time.

One more thing, I think the grip should be a little lighter.
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Quote :mina: Replybullet Posted: 09 September 2006 at 2:15pm
Nice lineart :D
Sleek 'n simple, it looks good.
 
Just my input: some wear & tear on the griptape would look cool, or some scratches on the deck from grinding rails. >.0
What are you thinking of pixellating for the deck graphic?
 
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Quote fthmdg Replybullet Posted: 10 September 2006 at 9:26am
ya we could do another collab if you guys want too. That'd be cool. Let me finish up the metal things and correct the grip tape and then we can do a collab. I dont really know why i made this, but i did. lol

thanks for the C&C. Ill post another thing once I update it.
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Quote fthmdg Replybullet Posted: 10 September 2006 at 9:49am
new griptape idea? i think its too light, but im not sure. Attempted metal texture on trucks.


//edit i fixed the grip tape! haha



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Quote Monkey 'o Doom Replybullet Posted: 10 September 2006 at 12:08pm
The lightest gray on the metal could be darkened a good bit to make it look much better. Also, maybe antialias the inside of the wheels a little bit.

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