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fil_razorback
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    Posted: 07 October 2006 at 5:14pm
Lineart by rabidbaboy
Coloring by me.

Please, give me crits, comments or edits. These help me a lot, I want to get better =)
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 07 October 2006 at 5:43pm
I don't know that I like the color of the claws on the wings too much. Maybe its just the color being the same as the eye and feet. I wonder if the bottom of the wings faded from bottom to top with say, a purple blending to green would make the central body head stand out in a more appealing way. Then maybe an orange/red/purple eye. Since its someones lineart that you are just coloring I would try to own it more. This limited palette is too.........limited.

ps: How's your game coming along?
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 07 October 2006 at 11:04pm
It looks like he's standing at an angle but his wings aren't at an angle.        
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Quote chess Replybullet Posted: 11 October 2006 at 8:09am
shading is great but make more contrasts at more points plz, it would kick as than
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