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Pieface
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Topic: 5 Pencil
Posted: 22 October 2006 at 7:41am

Ok im not finished, got to Fix

Metal Part
Lead Part
Rest Of Body
Curving it all
AA
Shading

Just Wanna know if it looks better at the moment?

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leel
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Posted: 22 October 2006 at 7:52am

well it does less round, only i think the lines in the middle should be the lightest yellow, the highlight. also i think the palette as a whole is a little too green-ish like someone already mentioned in the clock thread.

I like the dithering on the eraser, but it's a little hard to see, so more contrast perhaps?

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Pieface
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Posted: 22 October 2006 at 7:58am

Ok Thanks for the suggestions, I will work on that as soon as I can

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Pieface
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Posted: 22 October 2006 at 8:14am

Is that looking a bit better?

EDIT:

Took away weird Black Lines, Added Chew marks, Took away Black Lines, Started AA, made Lead part a bit longer

Edited by Pieface - 22 October 2006 at 8:50am

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cpaw88
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Posted: 22 October 2006 at 9:37am

It looks plastic a bit, the tip should look more wooden, everything else looks great.

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Pieface
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Posted: 22 October 2006 at 9:41am

yeh i said i was gonn fix that... and guess what I did

Hows it looking now guys and gals

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cpaw88
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Posted: 22 October 2006 at 9:50am

Originally posted by Pieface

yeh i said i was gonn fix that... and guess what I did

Hows it looking now guys and gals

I was just giving my C&C on this peice even though you stated that you're working on fixing those parts.

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Pieface
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Posted: 22 October 2006 at 9:54am

I know... I wasn't complaining, I was hoping the smilie would make it look like sarcasm tbh

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Equinoxx
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Posted: 22 October 2006 at 1:58pm

i'm glad you took queues of my example. that's good
however, there are still some parts that aren't all that. for example, the curves aren't the same everywhere.

I'm talking about the outercurves of the form compared to the innercurves of the light yellow line

a whole lot better then it was though

Zombies

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Pieface Commander Joined: 09 February 2006 Location: England Online Status: Offline Posts: 146	Topic: 5 Pencil Posted: 22 October 2006 at 7:41am
	Ok im not finished, got to Fix Metal Part Lead Part Rest Of Body Curving it all AA Shading Just Wanna know if it looks better at the moment?
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leel Commander Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001	Posted: 22 October 2006 at 7:52am
	well it does less round, only i think the lines in the middle should be the lightest yellow, the highlight. also i think the palette as a whole is a little too green-ish like someone already mentioned in the clock thread. I like the dithering on the eraser, but it's a little hard to see, so more contrast perhaps?
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Pieface Commander Joined: 09 February 2006 Location: England Online Status: Offline Posts: 146	Posted: 22 October 2006 at 7:58am
	Ok Thanks for the suggestions, I will work on that as soon as I can
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Pieface Commander Joined: 09 February 2006 Location: England Online Status: Offline Posts: 146	Posted: 22 October 2006 at 8:14am
	Is that looking a bit better? EDIT: Took away weird Black Lines, Added Chew marks, Took away Black Lines, Started AA, made Lead part a bit longer Edited by Pieface - 22 October 2006 at 8:50am
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cpaw88 Seaman Joined: 18 October 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 24	Posted: 22 October 2006 at 9:37am
	It looks plastic a bit, the tip should look more wooden, everything else looks great.
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Pieface Commander Joined: 09 February 2006 Location: England Online Status: Offline Posts: 146	Posted: 22 October 2006 at 9:41am
	yeh i said i was gonn fix that... and guess what I did Hows it looking now guys and gals
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cpaw88 Seaman Joined: 18 October 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 24	Posted: 22 October 2006 at 9:50am
	*Originally posted by Pieface* yeh i said i was gonn fix that... and guess what I did Hows it looking now guys and gals I was just giving my C&C on this peice even though you stated that you're working on fixing those parts.
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Pieface Commander Joined: 09 February 2006 Location: England Online Status: Offline Posts: 146	Posted: 22 October 2006 at 9:54am
	I know... I wasn't complaining, I was hoping the smilie would make it look like sarcasm tbh
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Equinoxx Commander Joined: 16 December 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 164	Posted: 22 October 2006 at 1:58pm
	i'm glad you took queues of my example. that's good however, there are still some parts that aren't all that. for example, the curves aren't the same everywhere. I'm talking about the outercurves of the form compared to the innercurves of the light yellow line a whole lot better then it was though
	Zombies
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