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    Posted: 14 January 2007 at 8:36am
i have started this deytroyed waterplane and want to get some comments and critics

yes i know the water is nonpixelart...



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Quote Omegavolt Replybullet Posted: 15 January 2007 at 6:15am
It needs a lot more detail really.  Metal plates, rivets, dents, vents, etc.  Also, find a single light source and stick with it thoughout the piece. ;)
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Quote Ensellitis Replybullet Posted: 15 January 2007 at 6:41am
you really need to cut down on these big pieces and work on stuff that is much smaller until you get the experience and skill for the sizes you are working in
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