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Christopher
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Joined: 09 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 110 |
![]() Topic: Revision needed on?Posted: 11 February 2007 at 1:57pm |
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What do i need to redo on this? |
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leel
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Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001 |
![]() Posted: 11 February 2007 at 3:06pm |
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There's a lot of things that you could do to improve this. Anatomy is the main issue - his pose looks awkward, the arms are different lengths, the knee on his right leg is too high, etc.
Another issue is the lightsource - the shading is inconsistent on the legs, and the skin has no shading at all. The hair could also use some work.
Overall, this isn't too aesthetically pleasing, I'm not a super spriter, so I strongly advise that you closely study some of the sprites in the gallery and try to figure out what it is about them that makes them effective.
Good luck
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Christopher
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Joined: 09 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 110 |
![]() Posted: 11 February 2007 at 3:15pm |
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I agree with the shading. Not with the akward pose thing because its an actual martial arts pose.
Thanks for the opinion, ill try to touch it up a little. |
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leel
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![]() Posted: 11 February 2007 at 3:18pm |
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So you believe you've absolutely perfectly rendered the pose?
Ok.
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Pixel_Outlaw
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Joined: 01 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3829 |
![]() Posted: 11 February 2007 at 7:30pm |
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YOu need to learn how to shade, go study some Capcom or SNK fighting game art.
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Ensellitis
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Joined: 19 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10099 |
![]() Posted: 11 February 2007 at 7:42pm |
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i would like to know what martial arts style that comes from... i have studied many styles of the martial arts and have never seen a pose like that before
Edited by Ensellitis - 11 February 2007 at 7:42pm |
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
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