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   I`ve done those angel/bird mixings and would like you to give me comments and criticism.

( please ignore the background, it is just WIP...)

Thanks in advance.

Edited by chess - 22 March 2007 at 8:00am

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chess Commander Joined: 11 October 2006 Location: Germany Online Status: Offline Posts: 249	Topic: Wings Posted: 22 March 2007 at 8:00am
	I`ve done those angel/bird mixings and would like you to give me comments and criticism. ( please ignore the background, it is just WIP...) Thanks in advance. Edited by chess - 22 March 2007 at 8:00am
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Monkey 'o Doom Commander Joined: 24 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2994	Posted: 22 March 2007 at 2:35pm
	I like these, but some things could use some fixing. The red could use to be desaturated on the grey angel/birds, as does the green on the green one. Those grey ones in the bottom-right could use to be given some more and brighter highlights and the outlines on those seem a bit too harsh; replace them with dark greys where they should be thinner. The grey one with the two stacked square red bits seems a bid boring and is weird with the flat surface pointing frontward. Maybe make the upper square a triangle or arched shape? The antialiasing you have in several places on the outsides of the sprites looks like it's not really helping and the piece would be better off without it. The green angel/bird, once desaturated and maybe darkened, could use some elements that bring it more into the 3rd dimension. The orange angel/bird and the grey ones have some wings that seem to come towards the viewer; maybe do something like that on the green one to add depth. Most of these are pretty solid overall, and I like the feather texture a lot. Good luck improving what needs it.
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