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PixelTheDoll
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Topic: Room I made
Posted: 05 April 2007 at 6:25pm

So...I tried to make a room for the first time (finally)

Tell me what I should fix plz i know it looks totally unrealistic

I dont know what to do to make it more realistic like this

Edited by PixelTheDoll - 05 April 2007 at 6:28pm

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Metaru
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Posted: 05 April 2007 at 10:59pm

Wrong section, this must be in the WIP (wich means Work in Progress, just in case you didn't know)

in your last topic, Jalonso suggested you to search and read isometric tutorial, because you want to make "rooms to place your dolls"(Backgrounds). since you don't pay attetion to that wise advice (:D), i'll send you to google and find and read one of those tutorials again.

now, the problem with your room is that it lacks any kind of Perspective. perspective is "a system of representing three-dimensional objects on a two-dimensional surface, giving the illusion of depth in space. Linear perspective deals with drawing, and atmospheric perspective attempts to use color and value changes to get the effect of distance." that my friend, is what make your room look like a bad april's fool joke.

personally, i do not like dolls, both real and pixel ones.

I ate leel's babies

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PixelTheDoll
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Posted: 06 April 2007 at 9:13pm

So, I tried to make something more simple, and it also sucks lol the window is crooked I guess eventually ill move up to rooms so anyway thanks for replying and your advice..heres what I tried.

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Metaru
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Posted: 06 April 2007 at 10:26pm

just keep practicing over and over and over and over.

I ate leel's babies

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Dra_chan
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Posted: 06 April 2007 at 11:33pm

You should start doing soemthing smaller. Also your lines in the iso building are jaggy.

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Hapiel
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Posted: 07 April 2007 at 12:33am

Very jaggy indeed.... but I dont think dolls would look good in an isometric room... The room you showed us is just a flat one.. front view. and you dont need any iso things for that... what I mean is the same way you made the doll, the tv, and the bed.. the chair isnt that good :(

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leel
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Posted: 07 April 2007 at 11:31am

did anyone else notice that half the stuff isn't even pixel art?

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Pixel_Outlaw
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Posted: 07 April 2007 at 12:13pm

Yes.

I'm just waiting to see where the iso room goes..

I don't have anything against oblique perspective however.

If you decide sto stay in oblique perspective go with this

All your 2d images should be given depth by keeping the same angle along the z axis.

Edited by Pixel_Outlaw - 07 April 2007 at 12:22pm

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Aleiav
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Posted: 07 April 2007 at 11:50pm

Uh... your girl looks like a resized doll. You can't resize something if you want it to be pixel art.

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Metaru
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Posted: 08 April 2007 at 2:18am

"i made it on MS Paint... that's why is pixel art"
>Wrong.

I ate leel's babies

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Skull
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Posted: 08 April 2007 at 5:11am

Originally posted by PixelTheDoll

I would sue that Glazier.

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kick
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Posted: 08 April 2007 at 2:35pm

for iso make sure you have the degrees right on your guide lines

and make sure the other lines are parallel/perpindicular when necessary

Edited by kick - 08 April 2007 at 2:35pm

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AdrianJensen
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Posted: 08 April 2007 at 3:03pm

dont use the line tool for iso pixel art, because your lines wont come out perfect, and that's why your window looks crooked.
rather, you should draw the out, pixel by pixel.

My gallery lives here:
http://www.pixeljoint.com/p/8355.htm?pg=1&sec=icons

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Blueberry_pie
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Posted: 08 April 2007 at 3:16pm

Did you even make that doll yourself? On the right, above the hand, I can vaguely make out some text, which I assume would be the artist's name.

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leel
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Posted: 08 April 2007 at 4:29pm

it says angy chan, the base maker.

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Hapiel
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Posted: 08 April 2007 at 4:38pm

Originally posted by Blueberry_pie

Did you even make that doll yourself? On the right, above the hand, I can vaguely make out some text, which I assume would be the artist's name.

since the doll is resized, im not able to read it

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PixelTheDoll Seaman Joined: 28 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5	Topic: Room I made Posted: 05 April 2007 at 6:25pm
	So...I tried to make a room for the first time (finally) Tell me what I should fix plz i know it looks totally unrealistic I dont know what to do to make it more realistic like this Edited by PixelTheDoll - 05 April 2007 at 6:28pm
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Metaru Commander Joined: 03 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 05 April 2007 at 10:59pm
	Wrong section, this must be in the WIP (wich means Work in Progress, just in case you didn't know) in your last topic, Jalonso suggested you to search and read isometric tutorial, because you want to make "rooms to place your dolls"(Backgrounds). since you don't pay attetion to that wise advice (:D), i'll send you to google and find and read one of those tutorials again. now, the problem with your room is that it lacks any kind of Perspective. perspective is "a system of representing three-dimensional objects on a two-dimensional surface, giving the illusion of depth in space. Linear perspective deals with drawing, and atmospheric perspective attempts to use color and value changes to get the effect of distance." that my friend, is what make your room look like a bad april's fool joke. personally, i do not like dolls, both real and pixel ones.
	I ate leel's babies
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PixelTheDoll Seaman Joined: 28 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5	Posted: 06 April 2007 at 9:13pm
	So, I tried to make something more simple, and it also sucks lol the window is crooked I guess eventually ill move up to rooms so anyway thanks for replying and your advice..heres what I tried.
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Metaru Commander Joined: 03 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 06 April 2007 at 10:26pm
	just keep practicing over and over and over and over.
	I ate leel's babies
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Dra_chan Commander Joined: 20 February 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 628	Posted: 06 April 2007 at 11:33pm
	You should start doing soemthing smaller. Also your lines in the iso building are jaggy.
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Hapiel Rear Admiral Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266	Posted: 07 April 2007 at 12:33am
	Very jaggy indeed.... but I dont think dolls would look good in an isometric room... The room you showed us is just a flat one.. front view. and you dont need any iso things for that... what I mean is the same way you made the doll, the tv, and the bed.. the chair isnt that good :(
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leel Commander Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001	Posted: 07 April 2007 at 11:31am
	did anyone else notice that half the stuff isn't even pixel art?
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Pixel_Outlaw Commander Joined: 01 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3829	Posted: 07 April 2007 at 12:13pm
	Yes. I'm just waiting to see where the iso room goes.. I don't have anything against oblique perspective however. If you decide sto stay in oblique perspective go with this All your 2d images should be given depth by keeping the same angle along the z axis. Edited by Pixel_Outlaw - 07 April 2007 at 12:22pm

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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 07 April 2007 at 11:50pm
	Uh... your girl looks like a resized doll. You can't resize something if you want it to be pixel art.
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Metaru Commander Joined: 03 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 08 April 2007 at 2:18am
	"i made it on MS Paint... that's why is pixel art" >Wrong.
	I ate leel's babies
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Skull Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521	Posted: 08 April 2007 at 5:11am
	*Originally posted by PixelTheDoll* I would sue that Glazier.

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kick Seaman Joined: 27 January 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2	Posted: 08 April 2007 at 2:35pm
	for iso make sure you have the degrees right on your guide lines and make sure the other lines are parallel/perpindicular when necessary Edited by kick - 08 April 2007 at 2:35pm
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AdrianJensen Commander Joined: 18 January 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 238	Posted: 08 April 2007 at 3:03pm
	dont use the line tool for iso pixel art, because your lines wont come out perfect, and that's why your window looks crooked. rather, you should draw the out, pixel by pixel.
	My gallery lives here: http://www.pixeljoint.com/p/8355.htm?pg=1&sec=icons
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Blueberry_pie Rear Admiral Joined: 24 July 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2176	Posted: 08 April 2007 at 3:16pm
	Did you even make that doll yourself? On the right, above the hand, I can vaguely make out some text, which I assume would be the artist's name.
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leel Commander Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001	Posted: 08 April 2007 at 4:29pm
	it says angy chan, the base maker.
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Hapiel Rear Admiral Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266	Posted: 08 April 2007 at 4:38pm
	*Originally posted by Blueberry_pie* Did you even make that doll yourself? On the right, above the hand, I can vaguely make out some text, which I assume would be the artist's name. since the doll is resized, im not able to read it
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