Pixel Joint Forum: [WIP] Warrior

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So this thing got rejected when tried to submit. And I really liked it and felt so proud ;). Anyway since obviously it needs to be corrected I would like to know what would you guys add/change/delete.

And a single one.

Is it that bad?   C&C really welcomed (please, destroy me   )

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agur Seaman Joined: 27 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 18	Topic: [WIP] Warrior Posted: 07 April 2007 at 2:50pm
	Hi So this thing got rejected when tried to submit. And I really liked it and felt so proud ;). Anyway since obviously it needs to be corrected I would like to know what would you guys add/change/delete. And a single one. Is it that bad? C&C really welcomed (please, destroy me )
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 07 April 2007 at 11:48pm
	The feet are awkwardly placed.
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halfDemon Commander Joined: 04 February 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 318	Posted: 07 April 2007 at 11:50pm
	He's on a complete slant: straighten him out.
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agur Seaman Joined: 27 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 18	Posted: 08 April 2007 at 12:55am
	*Originally posted by halfDemon* He's on a complete slant: straighten him out. Could you be more specific? In which way. I might have spent to much time on it couse I don't see it :/. Same goes for feet. Seem pretty natural to me :/.
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Metaru Commander Joined: 03 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 08 April 2007 at 2:14am
	-the arm that holds the sword it's just a tube hanging from the shoulder's armor. -left shoulder is \ while rigth shoulder is _ -the armor 's chest looks like boobs, also check the shape of it. -the head is tinny compared to the rest of the body. i would also modify the shape of it. regards ~Metaru
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Skull Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521	Posted: 08 April 2007 at 5:06am
	Considering there's a shield bearing the cross of Saint George, is this guy meant to be a crusader?

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Metaru Commander Joined: 03 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 08 April 2007 at 5:58am
	i just think is some kind of random shield. a piece of equiment. notice he has also a spartan helmet and a broadsword.
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agur Seaman Joined: 27 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 18	Posted: 08 April 2007 at 8:56am
	*Originally posted by Metaru* i just think is some kind of random shield. a piece of equiment. notice he has also a spartan helmet and a broadsword. LOL. Now that sums it up allright. I didn't even know that this is saint Georges shield. To be honest I just put it all together randomly ;] without thinking of any historical background. And thank you very much for those pointers. I'll try to fix them and then I'll post my progress ;]. So. Done some editing to the armor and now I hope it looks better (no boobs). Moved a little the shield to look more natural IMO. And now I've got to come up with a way to fix that right tube arm (any suggestions here as to how?) and the head. Edited by agur - 08 April 2007 at 9:34am
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Metaru Commander Joined: 03 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 08 April 2007 at 11:10am
	please, use another color rather than black for the transparency. i had to take a screenshot in order to make this edit.
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agur Seaman Joined: 27 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 18	Posted: 08 April 2007 at 12:36pm
	Thanks for the advice. I edited it once more. Hope it's getting better. Still don't like the fell of the head. Although it's better then it was i think. Arms looking nice - thx Metaru. Also edited left shoe, and remade the right one. Hope it gets better.
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Metaru Commander Joined: 03 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 08 April 2007 at 6:52pm
	while the left leg looks like this \ the left boots come likes this I, wich looks weird. also i have a kuestion: is this a side view game( like contra) or an overview game(like FF)? Edited by Metaru - 08 April 2007 at 6:52pm
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agur Seaman Joined: 27 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 18	Posted: 09 April 2007 at 1:09am
	Good point about the leg. I'll try to fix that. As to what sort of game is the character for, I have to say neither. Well it was suposed to be an overwiev iso game, but it just wont do. And the guy looks more sideview anyway. But since this is my first pixel art character I just want to finish it, regardles of using him in any kind of project. Might use him though for an inventory screen or something.
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agur Seaman Joined: 27 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 18	Posted: 09 April 2007 at 3:50am
	So an update. Redraw once again his left shoe to make it look more \ instead of I. Looks better gotta say. Added hair and doodled with the helmets yet again.
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Metaru Commander Joined: 03 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 10 April 2007 at 2:04am
	and now get rid of tht nasty shadow and it's done.
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agur Seaman Joined: 27 March 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 18	Posted: 10 April 2007 at 7:38am
	Yeah, the shadow is naaasty ;P. I don't know how it stayed there ;]. Anyway thanks a million for the help :)
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Metaru Commander Joined: 03 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 10 April 2007 at 6:11pm
	indeed, that's why we are here. hope to see a full pack of items for that knigth.
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