Pixel Joint Forum: Cortez

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   Cortez from PM TTYD

i'think i'm done. Because i lost interrest in this PA and want to make something else, however i still want to know your opinion.

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Guss Seaman Joined: 01 April 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1	Topic: Cortez Posted: 22 April 2007 at 10:46am
	Cortez from PM TTYD i'think i'm done. Because i lost interrest in this PA and want to make something else, however i still want to know your opinion.
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 22 April 2007 at 1:52pm
	Very nice, delete the white BG (www.giffy.com), palette and make a seperate image using just the head as your new original avvy :D
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MashPotato Commander Joined: 05 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 237	Posted: 22 April 2007 at 2:09pm
	It's nice, I like it ^_^. One thing that bugs me is the long thin sword, there are some dark pixels on the upper edge that makes the blade look irregularly-shaped. Also, because the grey is very similar in colour to the glove colour, the tip looks like it's going behind the hand holding the curved sword, which looks a bit odd.
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Monkey 'o Doom Commander Joined: 24 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2994	Posted: 22 April 2007 at 5:05pm
	What jalonso means is http://www.iaza.com . I think it seems rather muddy and pillowshaded because you have the dark color as a border around all of the tan shapes. Eliminate the border where it shouldn't be and move your highlights to show the lightsource more like the sword does. I might also add that the second arm from the right is very hard to envision at the meeting of the hand and arm. The wrist would have to be a really strange shape to accomodate the difference in positions there and so I suggest you move the hand or arm to fix the weird disjointment there. I realize you said you didn't really want to update it, but keep these things in mind on your next piece. If you have a program that can use layers, make use of them to avoid situations like the onw with his wrist here. Good luck!
	RPG is numberwang.
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Pixel_Outlaw Commander Joined: 01 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3829	Posted: 22 April 2007 at 5:14pm
	Is he made of bean bags?

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