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Stacy3601
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Joined: 05 January 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 19 |
![]() Topic: [WIP]bunny plushPosted: 20 May 2007 at 5:15pm |
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just wanted some CandC on this before i try and submit it to the gallery. how to improve it and what not.
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jalonso
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![]() Posted: 20 May 2007 at 6:47pm |
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The contrast is a bit weak. Fixing that and toning down the overly saturated colors could make a much better pixel.
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Stacy3601
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Joined: 05 January 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 19 |
![]() Posted: 21 May 2007 at 9:08am |
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is this better or worse?
![]() i tried playing around with the saturation and colors. |
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Gryturd
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Joined: 16 May 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 26 |
![]() Posted: 21 May 2007 at 9:30am |
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Better, much better, but like you said, im also new to pixeling so dont take my advice as gospel
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jalonso
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![]() Posted: 21 May 2007 at 11:38am |
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Seems more like a color change than a contrast change. Mind you its no guarantee it will look better its just that all the pixels are kinda running together into a pixel pudding if you will.
Edited by jalonso - 21 May 2007 at 12:14pm |
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leel
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Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001 |
![]() Posted: 21 May 2007 at 12:32pm |
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I'd tone down the dithering. It takes away from the cartoony feel.
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Stacy3601
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Joined: 05 January 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 19 |
![]() Posted: 21 May 2007 at 5:38pm |
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I thought i added contrast to it... I made the shades of colors i used
have more of a difference between them. meaning, there is more contrast
between the darkest pink and the next shade, and so on. but maybe i am
not fully understanding what you mean by contrast jalonso
I took some of the dithering out, but not i dont think it has that soft look to it that i was going for... what do yall think of the latest edit?
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Larwick
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![]() Posted: 21 May 2007 at 6:03pm |
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Nooooooo the dithering gave the doll texture, and the bright colours were stylish! Bah! Is what i have to say on the matter.
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leel
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![]() Posted: 21 May 2007 at 6:10pm |
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That's not quite what I meant. I'll give you an edit in a bit ;)
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Stacy3601
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Joined: 05 January 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 19 |
![]() Posted: 21 May 2007 at 6:17pm |
![]() thanks larwick i think the original colors looked good. the dull pink is boring. how is this? Edited by Stacy3601 - 21 May 2007 at 6:27pm |
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leel
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![]() Posted: 21 May 2007 at 7:13pm |
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Acidic is the first word that came to mind. I realize that hot pink may sound exciting, but it just doesn't look pleasant imho
here's what i meant about the dithering - it was completely overtaking the whole thing, and by using solid shades and soft dithering for texture you can make it look like a 3d object rather than just blinding pixels all in straight rows. hope it gives you some ideas. I also tried to give it more shape - like the belly and such, that's what makes it less boring. when you have a ball sitting on top of another ball then yes, it will be pretty boring, so give it slightly more complex form. |
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Ensellitis
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Joined: 19 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10099 |
![]() Posted: 21 May 2007 at 7:22pm |
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try some direction dithering... dont have the time to actually edit right now, but my year of the boar piece is a good example:
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
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Aleiav
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![]() Posted: 22 May 2007 at 9:17am |
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The think making the shadows deeper further away from the lightsource will make it pop more.
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