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Quote Stacy3601 Replybullet Topic: [WIP]bunny plush
    Posted: 20 May 2007 at 5:15pm
just wanted some CandC on this before i try and submit it to the gallery.  how to improve it and what not.






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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 20 May 2007 at 6:47pm
The contrast is a bit weak. Fixing that and toning down the overly saturated colors could make a much better pixel.
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Quote Stacy3601 Replybullet Posted: 21 May 2007 at 9:08am
is this better or worse?



i tried playing around with the saturation and colors.
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Quote Gryturd Replybullet Posted: 21 May 2007 at 9:30am
Better, much better, but like you said, im also new to pixeling so dont take my advice as gospel
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 21 May 2007 at 11:38am
Seems more like a color change than a contrast change. Mind you its no guarantee it will look better its just that all the pixels are kinda running together into a pixel pudding if you will.





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Quote leel Replybullet Posted: 21 May 2007 at 12:32pm
I'd tone down the dithering.  It takes away from the cartoony feel.
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Quote Stacy3601 Replybullet Posted: 21 May 2007 at 5:38pm
I thought i added contrast to it... I made the shades of colors i used have more of a difference between them. meaning, there is more contrast between the darkest pink and the next shade, and so on.  but maybe i am not fully understanding what you mean by contrast jalonso

I took some of the dithering out, but not i dont think it has that soft look to it that i was going for... what do yall think of the latest edit?

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Quote Larwick Replybullet Posted: 21 May 2007 at 6:03pm
Nooooooo the dithering gave the doll texture, and the bright colours were stylish! Bah! Is what i have to say on the matter.
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Quote leel Replybullet Posted: 21 May 2007 at 6:10pm
That's not quite what I meant.  I'll give you an edit in a bit ;)
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Quote Stacy3601 Replybullet Posted: 21 May 2007 at 6:17pm


thanks larwick  i think the original colors looked good. the dull pink is boring.  how is this?


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Quote leel Replybullet Posted: 21 May 2007 at 7:13pm
Acidic is the first word that came to mind.  I realize that hot pink may sound exciting, but it just doesn't look pleasant imho


here's what i meant about the dithering - it was completely overtaking the whole thing, and by using solid shades and soft dithering for texture you can make it look like a 3d object rather than just blinding pixels all in straight rows.


hope it gives you some ideas.  I also tried to give it more shape - like the belly and such, that's what makes it less boring.  when you have a ball sitting on top of another ball then yes, it will be pretty boring, so give it slightly more complex form.
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Quote Ensellitis Replybullet Posted: 21 May 2007 at 7:22pm
try some direction dithering...  dont have the time to actually edit right now, but my year of the boar piece is a good example:


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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 22 May 2007 at 9:17am
The think making the shadows deeper further away from the lightsource will make it pop more.
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