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Quote Gryturd Replybullet Topic: [WIP] Weird Guy With Balloons
    Posted: 21 May 2007 at 8:13am
I drew a weird guy with balloons, bear in mind that i want him to look cartoony, and also im a noob pixeler.
 
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Feedback and C + C and any potential ideas for it.
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Quote Stacy3601 Replybullet Posted: 21 May 2007 at 9:15am
it needs more contrast.  try choosing a more dark color for the shadow and balloons. and a lighter color for the highlights.  i'm still new at pixeling too so... my advice may not be the best there is :P
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Quote Gryturd Replybullet Posted: 24 May 2007 at 1:59am

Is no one else going to comment or criticise this, i just realised there are still randow white bits around it, but i have it saved in college so i wont be able to edit it until next week.

Just give me some idas and fixes for it please :D

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Quote ruckus Replybullet Posted: 26 May 2007 at 2:57pm
i think u shud change the shape of the guy to look slightly less gay but otherwise its quite gud
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Quote Gryturd Replybullet Posted: 26 May 2007 at 3:05pm
He is meant to be like that shape, the shape of an egg, the shape is not getting changed, though i might AA him, what do you all think?
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Quote Monkey 'o Doom Replybullet Posted: 26 May 2007 at 6:54pm
Don't jump the gun with stuff like antialiasing yet: you need a grounder in the basics of shading, composition, and color before you delve too fully into a specific medium, such as pixel art. I recommend you seek instruction in the form of an art fundamentals class at your place of education or look for a primer on the web if that isn't an option. You'll be surprised how much you improve with a little formal education as opposed to a boatload of critiques; a forum such as this is suited to tweaks and opinions rather than instruction of the groundwork those tweaks and opinions are constructed upon.

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