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    Posted: 21 June 2007 at 2:32pm
i dont know if this'll be in time for the weekly. but i do intend to finish it anyhow.
this is phase one, i'd like to get comments on placement of things and likeness only. i know its sketchy...
 
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Quote pixelblink Replybullet Posted: 21 June 2007 at 10:19pm
at the moment it is VERY oekaki.. but I'm lovin it. I think you're going in the right direction with this. Just keep at it and lose the oekaki look and it'll be in my top faves for this challenge!
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Quote zeid Replybullet Posted: 22 June 2007 at 1:26am
Look at the difference in the left and right eye, it looks off.

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Quote Skull Replybullet Posted: 22 June 2007 at 2:15am
Wow, great likeness so far.
I await to see how you neaten it up. :)
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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 24 June 2007 at 5:57pm
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Quote EyeCraft Replybullet Posted: 25 June 2007 at 1:11pm
I'd say there's too much definition in her front teeth as compared to the photo, and her left eyebrow is too heavy/dark. Her right eye isn't as obscured by her hair in your picture as it is in the photo, I don't know if that's a stylistic choice you've made to improve the picture, though.

Her hairline is slightly more angular than what you've got drawn in, also. That's all I've got so far. Good luck with it!
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