Pixel Joint Forum: Guitarist Lines

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   Beginning WIP:

So far, i've gotten the lines almost finished.

I cant get the left arm to look right, im thinking i need to bring out the elbow to where the arm is bent towards the guitar. But i cant get it so far

Edited by Christopher - 27 June 2007 at 5:52pm

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Christopher Commander Joined: 09 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 110	Topic: Guitarist Lines Posted: 27 June 2007 at 5:47pm
	Beginning WIP: So far, i've gotten the lines almost finished. I cant get the left arm to look right, im thinking i need to bring out the elbow to where the arm is bent towards the guitar. But i cant get it so far Edited by Christopher - 27 June 2007 at 5:52pm
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Christopher Commander Joined: 09 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 110	Posted: 28 June 2007 at 9:39am
	Progress Not sure where im going with the pants right now, also i need to work with the guitar alot more, any suggestions. Increase contrast? anything. Even though im yet to get a crit for the lineart, ill just move on along EDIT: I got bored and drew him some legs, then i noticed that the stance might be unbalanced (I think i messed up the shirt logo transparency, its on my other computer so ill fix once i get around to it.) Edited by Christopher - 28 June 2007 at 12:47pm

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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 28 June 2007 at 1:17pm
	Where's the light coming from? You don't really have a definable light source here. The bottom is shaded as if the light was coming from the bottom right hand corner and the shirt is shaded as if the light is coming from the top left.
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Christopher Commander Joined: 09 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 110	Posted: 28 June 2007 at 1:19pm
	Dont know where you're getting that thing about the shirt from, seeing as the darkest shade is in the top left.

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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 28 June 2007 at 1:25pm
	Yes, but the brightest shade is in the middle. Think top left over him, not right beside him. At any rate, your light sources are still inconsistent, regardless of where the top left one is.
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Monkey 'o Doom Commander Joined: 24 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2994	Posted: 28 June 2007 at 1:54pm
	Contrast, man! You need to give the piece more contrast so things look like more than solid-filled outlines. The anatomy is also a bit off; his head and arms are deformed. Try to define joints better and really make sure the angles limbs are taking in 3D space are apparent.
	RPG is numberwang.
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