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   Right, this makes sense. This is for fun. Its not going to turn into a real game but i'm going to do screenshots as such. The game will be called SoulChild =P.
Here is my WIP Mockup. I have the grass and dirt tile things down. Please C+C.

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SoulChild Midshipman Joined: 28 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 58	Topic: Mockup Posted: 01 July 2007 at 5:14am
	Right, this makes sense. This is for fun. Its not going to turn into a real game but i'm going to do screenshots as such. The game will be called SoulChild =P. Here is my WIP Mockup. I have the grass and dirt tile things down. Please C+C.
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PixelSnader Commander Not a troll! Joined: 05 June 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3194	Posted: 01 July 2007 at 5:28am
	i'd make the dirt fade in to back a bit slower, right now it's very abrupt
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SoulChild Midshipman Joined: 28 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 58	Posted: 01 July 2007 at 5:43am
	Any Better? I raised the saturation of everything aswell! Edited by SoulChild - 01 July 2007 at 5:43am
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 12 January 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 01 July 2007 at 9:11am
	No, no that did not work. Snader means fade the bottom of the tiles like this example.
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SoulChild Midshipman Joined: 28 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 58	Posted: 01 July 2007 at 9:20am
	Ah i will get on it when i get back from church.
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SoulChild Midshipman Joined: 28 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 58	Posted: 02 July 2007 at 8:20am
	I totally redid the bottom tile. I don't know if it looks good or not. I also added grass going up against the rock and hanging over the edge. Please C+C
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Hatch Admiral Joined: 05 August 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1387	Posted: 02 July 2007 at 8:38am
	It still looks like a very harsh and obvious line to me. It looks like you need to pull some of your darker base color down to break up the transition. Jalonso's link is worth a thousand words. Study it carefully and give it another try.
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