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Topic: Uber angelboss
Posted: 06 August 2007 at 1:08pm

Two creations in one. with sword, shield and lance.
+ cockscomb

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jalonso
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Posted: 06 August 2007 at 6:42pm

A bit over AAd on the lance. Is AA even needed there? I think salout would be fine.

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MashPotato
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Posted: 06 August 2007 at 7:11pm

Looks neat

Are the angles of the lance and the pointy thing on the right supposed to be different from the rest of the body, however? Everything else appears to be straight-on, while those two structures are pointed more downward.

the INDIE STONE

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leel
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Posted: 06 August 2007 at 8:03pm

The lance looks a little messy to me, especially with.. almost a dither there but not quite? I think it doesn't go with the style, so I tried to make it cleaner, and more sleek and shiny. Maybe I overdid it, but i definitely think you should clean it up a bit.

also, aa on the outside? kind of unnecessary, especially since the only other part of the outline that's also aa'ed is more subtle..

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chess
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Posted: 07 August 2007 at 7:42am

Originally posted by jalonso

A bit over AAd on the lance. Is AA even needed there? I think salout would be fine.

hey honey

i`ve fixed the lance.

Originally posted by MashPotato

Looks neat

Thank you MashPotato

The directions are simply mixed.

Originally posted by leel

The lance looks a little messy to me, especially with.. almost a dither there but not quite? I think it doesn't go with the style, so I tried to make it cleaner, and more sleek and shiny. Maybe I overdid it, but i definitely think you should clean it up a bit.also, aa on the outside? kind of unnecessary, especially since the only other part of the outline that's also aa'ed is more subtle..

Thank you leel! i learned a lot from your example, thank you for the edit.
i have fixed it my way and hope to match the qualitystandards.

Here it is:

Edited by chess - 07 August 2007 at 9:31am

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Squirrelsquid
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Posted: 07 August 2007 at 2:13pm

The new lance is a vast improvement! I think the the shield could use a bit better shading on the blue part... currently it looks like a blue wall with light blue sprinkles.

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chess Commander Joined: 11 October 2006 Location: Germany Online Status: Offline Posts: 249	Topic: Uber angelboss Posted: 06 August 2007 at 1:08pm
	Two creations in one. with sword, shield and lance. + cockscomb
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 06 August 2007 at 6:42pm
	A bit over AAd on the lance. Is AA even needed there? I think salout would be fine.
	PJs FAQ <•> Sticky Reads
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MashPotato Commander Joined: 05 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 237	Posted: 06 August 2007 at 7:11pm
	Looks neat Are the angles of the lance and the pointy thing on the right supposed to be different from the rest of the body, however? Everything else appears to be straight-on, while those two structures are pointed more downward.
	the INDIE STONE
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leel Commander Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001	Posted: 06 August 2007 at 8:03pm
	The lance looks a little messy to me, especially with.. almost a dither there but not quite? I think it doesn't go with the style, so I tried to make it cleaner, and more sleek and shiny. Maybe I overdid it, but i definitely think you should clean it up a bit. also, aa on the outside? kind of unnecessary, especially since the only other part of the outline that's also aa'ed is more subtle..
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chess Commander Joined: 11 October 2006 Location: Germany Online Status: Offline Posts: 249	Posted: 07 August 2007 at 7:42am
	*Originally posted by jalonso* A bit over AAd on the lance. Is AA even needed there? I think salout would be fine. hey honey i`ve fixed the lance. *Originally posted by MashPotato* Looks neat Are the angles of the lance and the pointy thing on the right supposed to be different from the rest of the body, however? Everything else appears to be straight-on, while those two structures are pointed more downward. Thank you MashPotato The directions are simply mixed. *Originally posted by leel* The lance looks a little messy to me, especially with.. almost a dither there but not quite? I think it doesn't go with the style, so I tried to make it cleaner, and more sleek and shiny. Maybe I overdid it, but i definitely think you should clean it up a bit.also, aa on the outside? kind of unnecessary, especially since the only other part of the outline that's also aa'ed is more subtle.. Thank you leel! i learned a lot from your example, thank you for the edit. i have fixed it my way and hope to match the qualitystandards. Here it is: Edited by chess - 07 August 2007 at 9:31am
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Squirrelsquid Commander Joined: 18 July 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 259	Posted: 07 August 2007 at 2:13pm
	The new lance is a vast improvement! I think the the shield could use a bit better shading on the blue part... currently it looks like a blue wall with light blue sprinkles.
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