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FrankieSmileShow
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 02 February 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 86 |
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THIS IS THE BEGINNING OF A LONG SERIES OF SUCK!
All these comics are about things that are really not funny. (its OEKEOAKEI or whatever its called. freehanded in paint with a tablet.) Ill post more when I do em. You can do you own and post em here if you like. ![]() |
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leel
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001 |
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oh... you were kidding? .. shucks.
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Larwick
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LMFAO, that just got better and better. The last big frame is awesome. Not so sure about the last frame though, if it's really needed. But great work man, keep them coming!
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skamocore
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hahaha awesome...except yah the last frame isn't really needed...seems like it's going on after the punchline's been given
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Monkey 'o Doom
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I disagree; I didn't laugh until I read the end. Without the last frame it's more of a "...wow." thing than a "haha funny" thing. At least IMO.
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soda
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It's not hilarious, laughing out loud kind of thing, but it gave me a chuckle. The sketchy art is astounding. Plus on that, for sure.
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Larwick
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Just thought, it might ring better if you have 'how about some' and then 'unprotected sex' rather than what it is now.
Also it isn't really meant to be laugh out loud funny, but i laughed out loud inside my head! |
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FrankieSmileShow
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 02 February 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 86 |
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Youre right larwick, separating UNPROTECTED SEX would be funnier,but bah, dont feel like editing it. I should have seen it earlier!
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jalonso
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Originally posted by FrankieSmileShow ...its OEKEOAKEI or whatever its called... You wish it was Okekaki ![]() |
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Stitchy
Commander ![]() ![]() PJ Pioneer Joined: 09 June 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 405 |
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I say lulz.
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FrankieSmileShow
Commander ![]() ![]() Joined: 02 February 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 86 |
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CHANGED IT SLIGHTLY at popular demand
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leel
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I liked 'freak' more.
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Monkey 'o Doom
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Agree.
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skamocore
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hmm I like this better :)
'Just Kidding. Yuck' is much better worded than what it was before, the original last panel was worded a bit awkwardly, i think. and separating Some and Unprotected Sex worked well |
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Aleiav
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pretty awesome!
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