Started off with the head and have expanded it out into a torso. Still needs a lot of work but it's starting to look quite good. I'm planning to make a black and white version and a colored version. Any crit would be helpful but bear in mind that the shading on the torso isn't finished yet ^^;

Small update. More crit appreciated.

Can't see the rest of his body but he might be off balance. His head is indeed too far forward. If his left arm is stretched out he is probably not off balance. Just not sure with this little of line art. Really nice sharp line art, the image is real clear and detailed all ready.

New update for the bunch of mind readers xD Yes I intended for his other arm to stretch out and it'll be pressed against a rock or perhaps something else if I change my mind.

The right arm and hand's are just basic sketches to help me with the placement of the legs, it'll be worked on once the rest of the body's complete. Hands, are very, very annoying. Onto the lower body!

Thanks for all the help thus far ^^


Edited by Wyverii - 27 November 2007 at 7:37am

Dangit, I didn't get much time to work on this but i've finally got round to finishing off the body. Arm needs to be fixed, fairly happy with the legs. Shading on arms and legs will be next.

PS. GeorgiePie, the hands aren't exactly conventional, the thumb is placed higher than it naturally would be on a human because it's a partial mix with how a wolf's paw works.

Who says werewolfies have to be angry all the time? ;p This one has an expression of mild interest on his face xD

Ah, I wondered that! I knew I should have said "Unless..." This is really awesome, I can't wait for some color =D

Yay, looks great ^^ I can't critic anything really ^^;

We should be able to see some more of the werewolf's left fingers. Unless they're, y'know, cut off or something.

His head looks slightly off center.

On second thoughts, i'll just reply to Black Dragon's crit-

Hey, I can't log onto the forums so I'll post my werewolf crit here:

Well, if he is going to lean on a rock, his left arm should be at a 170 degree angle instead of the steep 160 degree angle. That arm should be a little shorter. His right arm could be on his hip, he looks a bit uncomfortable holding it in the air like that. One last thing: his head should be about 4 pixels to the left.

Cheers! Feel free to post this for me.

Anyway, hand's in the correct position for how I want to lie on the rock, after all his fingers are very stiff compared to humans; I measured the proportions of the arms with my fingers while in 2x zoom and although it might not be pixel perfect it's certainly proportional and it's not going to change and I can't see why I have to change the right arm.

Honestly, if I tried to change some of this i'd become unhappy with the piece. I've moved the head left 3/4 pixels.




Edited by Wyverii - 02 December 2007 at 2:27pm