I'm not post here nothink from too much time heh and lose my pass and mail but now always is fine :)

Ok here are some building for one my project ... Post and two work files. The colors are take from there and aren't so good to repair them, but if need will do that ! Will be glad to hear if somebody have some corrections ...



and

last edition after help

thanks in advance :)


Edited by zi-double - 04 December 2007 at 5:28pm

Thanks man, as always you are right :)

... and add a bit details which are in some  height as in another entrance  and make columns to view not so simple.

One last thing before I go to work :(

After interference of jalonso look better



I'll think for more details ...

Thanks surt you are right :) but I always make light parts when the work is near to finish ... because else sometimes when make much changes or add some other parts they can throw shades and than make that work twice :(

ok I start to make that changes because I dont see much details which I can add and here is result untill now:

The hangar needs nothing, its AWESOME.

if anything, either the hangar needs to be widened or make the plane smaller, it dosen't seem like it could fit.

To me the windows and roof are ON the pumpkin not a part of it.

You wouldn't hate me because I love your work and by extension you too :p

This is what I meant by integrating the man-made elements into the organic ones.


It may be that the tree's foliage is not around the pumpkin but collaged onto it.
Making the foliage grow around the pumpkin is all that you need. The trunk is fine.

e:typo


Edited by jalonso - 07 December 2007 at 7:12am

it's a very dark scene but you have some very bright highlights that make it seem like it's glowing instead being reflected from somewhere.

On a plus note, the new edit looks better, especially the windows blending in.

I think if put more details or elements on the pumpkin will be very overburdened ...

that is until now:

wow, what beauties!

Very wimpy looking propellars is all I see to crit.
The window bubble on green plane #3 looks too flat, or missing glass dome?

current work on the fire station


and

thinking a bit and add some carriage ... maybe better will be with "pumpkin carriage", but carriage which try to make I'll use in another work :)


jalonso I want stuff to look old as before 30-40 years and that is why haven't glass, but /yellow plane/ make first and for me he isn't good and have some problems with the wings :(

Skaka I make them until try to improve details of the building maybe for 2-3 hours but I watch them and sometimes repair some details which aren't good ...  as example
1. take some picture to see some details
2. because scale is very little try to make some changes from original

in train poor is that I haven't red in my works else better will be with red colour ... and remove part for colas because will be a bit misunderstanding for somebody ... if you watch chimney will see they aren't in proper place but if I put them in that scale on right place will be badly ets.

in plane ... in first plane watch wings ... if you see lover wing is small but if I make him right with 1px small will be poor choice from red plane I watch how wings keep one to other ...

So are you going to make an isco-town with all this because if you're not then you should really consider it!

listen to advice jal :)

here is repairs

and some trees on which working now  ...


jamcob yep will make one "retro green village", but if I post work until now then will be very hard somebody to repair my mistakes and faults ... I think better is to add separately current works ...

Yer your right, then people can see each buidling/object as a seperate piece and feel their able to comment on it withought sounding picky.

Excellent work!My only complaint is that the spire on the middle dome of your buildings appears to be off center. It seems to come out of the back side of the dome rather than the top. Try bringing the spire's base down a few pixels.

Edited by Pixel_Outlaw - 13 December 2007 at 2:01pm

Jesus Christ!  i almost fell out of my chair when i saw the full image.  The scale of the image is fantastic.  This is inspiring. 

Im not sure if your finished, but the upper right corner doesnt  run off the page like all the other sides.  as far as composition goes, it needs one more building or some trees...

As I said in the beginning of this thread. You are one of the best at iso making. You have always been a source of insipiration. 

finish upper right corner and add some more details, shadows ets ...

In the last version when finish all details will repair some colours but I want to know first or second varian is better ... for me is second ! I'm not shure because watch so long time that works and :(



PS
shadows of the trees are incorect in some areas, but will repair them when finish arrangement of all trees !



Edited by zi-double - 27 December 2007 at 7:10pm

yep, right will change the red ... until now I use only for clothes and some other very small objects as barriers, but now with that fire cars I need and add 4th colour of red ... big red elements look at very poor and will change that colours !

In the end think to repair a bit contrast between grey colours ...

blue look at good maybe because he is cold colour as green. Yellow is in the gamma of the brown, but many big elements are in brown as streets ... that is why red with that saturation look at disgusting :)

I make mistake untill make last 2 building as always in different files and now I have two brown colours which are near one to another and will replace them :)

Thanks for suggestion Jal and here is edition of red



Edited by zi-double - 27 December 2007 at 8:30pm

Looking good.

One thing's bugging me though. The Green old-school car just right of image centre look out of scale in the direction of bigness.

*cough* Green Village *cough*

Planes of that era changed direction with the plane tilted to that angle. Watch an old war film and you will know what i mean.

Surt yep - repair it ... I watch old type of cars they are black and they are too long but now look better :)

Feron I want many colours to be in green and brown gamma and just add 4 blue colours for water, 3 colours for some metal elements and 2 yellow  + 2 red colours for some elements ... but when I want to make fire cars I add + 2 ekstra red :( Else I try how will look with red and grey roofs but 1st my favourite colour is green 2nd I think green carry some specific atmosphere 3rd I want to keep colours below 64.

Acherhar details isn't enough - if you look in one street will understand how much details and scenes have there :)

5L1V3R plane isn't in the best direction, but I put him there because want left upper corner to have something like corner direction and in that corner I don't see much scenes which I can make ... maybe only fire in the fields :)

Yep agreed jal "as much green as possible" everywhere hehehe ... why - because I watch too much ISO works as streets and towns and they are without enough trees and vegetation, but if somebody look will see that in real world have too much green :) I want all elements and details to be vissible that is why I try do not cross visible areas with vegetation :( Also I try every small character to have some employment in some small scene :) Also I try don't repeat elements more than twice, of cource some elements as telegraph pole try to put in different right points but to be vissible different parts !

else here is some update where I repair too much details and add more ... and try to repair some colours and to repair contrast ! ... I think that I'm near to finish that size !


Edited by zi-double - 05 January 2008 at 2:48am