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Quote yoursavior Replybullet Topic: [WIP] Zombie Dude
    Posted: 16 December 2007 at 5:39pm
Yeah, as the title says it's a zombie.



I think I did well on the shading on it's upper body but its pants look odd. Any suggestions on how to fix that, or on the sprite in general?

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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 16 December 2007 at 8:46pm
avoid using dithering in such small sprites, because it tends to make things hard to read/look messy.

also... maybe its me, but the red of the eyes could be replaced with your most dark gray. as it appears to be invisible.

if the weird anatomy of the shoulders isn't intentional(and in the whole character in general)... you should fix it. you have enought room there to make more defined and credible shapes.
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Quote yoursavior Replybullet Posted: 16 December 2007 at 9:19pm
I was trying to make him hunched over, which is why the anatomy is awkward, but I guess I should make that more apparent. I'll post an updated one tommorrow with the shading fixed and with (hopefully) more apparent posture.
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Quote yoursavior Replybullet Posted: 17 December 2007 at 12:48pm
This better?

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Quote Platnium Replybullet Posted: 17 December 2007 at 1:05pm
His face looks flat and more shading,and where is his mouth?
Other than that it is good.
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Quote yoursavior Replybullet Posted: 17 December 2007 at 1:14pm
I dom't know how I forgot to add the mouth. :/

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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 17 December 2007 at 1:34pm
i do believe its done.     
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