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yoursavior
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Joined: 11 September 2006 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 14 |
![]() Topic: [WIP] Zombie DudePosted: 16 December 2007 at 5:39pm |
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Yeah, as the title says it's a zombie.
I think I did well on the shading on it's upper body but its pants look odd. Any suggestions on how to fix that, or on the sprite in general? Edited by yoursavior - 16 December 2007 at 5:40pm |
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Metaru
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![]() Posted: 16 December 2007 at 8:46pm |
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avoid using dithering in such small sprites, because it tends to make things hard to read/look messy.
also... maybe its me, but the red of the eyes could be replaced with your most dark gray. as it appears to be invisible. if the weird anatomy of the shoulders isn't intentional(and in the whole character in general)... you should fix it. you have enought room there to make more defined and credible shapes. |
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I ate leel's babies
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yoursavior
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![]() Posted: 16 December 2007 at 9:19pm |
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I was trying to make him hunched over, which is why the anatomy is awkward, but I guess I should make that more apparent. I'll post an updated one tommorrow with the shading fixed and with (hopefully) more apparent posture.
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yoursavior
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![]() Posted: 17 December 2007 at 12:48pm |
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This better?
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Platnium
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![]() Posted: 17 December 2007 at 1:05pm |
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His face looks flat and more shading,and where is his mouth?
Other than that it is good. |
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yoursavior
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![]() Posted: 17 December 2007 at 1:14pm |
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I dom't know how I forgot to add the mouth. :/
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Metaru
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![]() Posted: 17 December 2007 at 1:34pm |
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i do believe its done.
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I ate leel's babies
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