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funcravers
Seaman
Joined: 03 December 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 31 |
![]() Topic: My first humanPosted: 02 January 2008 at 11:11pm |
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Ok, so this is my first human. It's nowhere near as good as I want. What I mostly need help with is the ear. (Little brown thing under his sunglasses. lol)
Here it is:
![]() I want to add a colored background to it. Either greenish blue, or a orange color. Comments and Crits gladly accepted. =] thanks guys.
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greenraven
Commander
Joined: 08 September 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2598 |
![]() Posted: 03 January 2008 at 8:48am |
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Technically this isn't a human, but rather a headshot.
It's not bad. But he seems a bit too blocky, unless that's the style you are going for, make him a bit rounder. |
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leel
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Joined: 29 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3001 |
![]() Posted: 03 January 2008 at 8:58am |
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Actual human profile:
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Gratheo
Seaman
Joined: 29 October 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 9 |
![]() Posted: 03 January 2008 at 9:53am |
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I'd try and change the ear. Take a look at this -
That's what a side view ear looks like. Yours is a circle, which is why it looks strange. Also, try using more than two colors so you can show more depth. |
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E-Bomb
Midshipman
Joined: 02 December 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 72 |
![]() Posted: 05 January 2008 at 5:12am |
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Humans have noses. And the thing covering his mouth is really weird.
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