Pixel Joint Forum: Oriental Dragon

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   @Larwick:
Thanks for the great visual! I fixed up the lower part of the body, but I can't see what's wrong with the neck...

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Amorphous Midshipman Joined: 12 September 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 60	Posted: 02 February 2008 at 12:35pm
	@Larwick: Thanks for the great visual! I fixed up the lower part of the body, but I can't see what's wrong with the neck... Update!
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Inventrix Midshipman Joined: 01 January 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 77	Posted: 02 February 2008 at 1:43pm
	I think it's not so much the neck as the line of the neck and the body. I did a similar thing to what Larwick did, except on top of your image and only for the neck and main part of the body. Hope it helps.
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Amorphous Midshipman Joined: 12 September 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 60	Posted: 04 February 2008 at 1:29pm
	Sorry for not posting sooner; I went and edited the neck slightly, although I haven't gotten it to look 100% right. It may still look strangely bent, but I'm completely out of ideas... EDIT: Right after posting the picture, I fixed up a few pixels, and thus here is the new VERY minor update: Edited by Amorphous - 04 February 2008 at 1:31pm
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Blu Commander Joined: 23 January 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 208	Posted: 04 February 2008 at 3:27pm
	The neck seems a little too long, now...I ... think. Isn't quite sure The tail almost seems to have a kink in it still, but it looks really good. :) Great job, coming so far. ^^ Edited by BluWriter - 04 February 2008 at 7:31pm
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MashPotato Commander Joined: 05 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 237	Posted: 04 February 2008 at 6:20pm
	It's an interesting take on a dragon I did a quick shifting around; this is basically just cutting and pasting what you had (messily) to give you an idea of how the curves could be changed. I also slimmed down the neck, head and arms a bit. My edit on the bottom: Hope this helps, good luck! Edited by MashPotato - 04 February 2008 at 6:19pm
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Amorphous Midshipman Joined: 12 September 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 60	Posted: 07 February 2008 at 12:14pm
	@MashPotato: Thanks for the edit, but I don't want the dragon to be any slimmer than it already is. I'll update again soon; I'm thinking of submitting this soon, but I'm not sure that I should... Then again, I'm really starting to get sick of this... EDIT: Update, mainly just the tail. Edited by Amorphous - 08 February 2008 at 4:12pm
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