Pixel Joint Forum: My First Line art

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dcontell
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Topic: My First Line art
Posted: 14 August 2005 at 6:51pm

my first lineart to be colored.
Is the oak's lab. of prof.

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Moonstrider
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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 7:05pm

Looks pretty good. Maybe you could have a bit more details on the windmill thing. And it looks a bit odd, like its out of perspective or something... But things are generally a bit skewed so it may be a style issue too.

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SplatPixel
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Posted: 14 August 2005 at 8:01pm

bet this is gonna look amazing when you add in some color. i like the perspective on this, very nicely done.

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sedgemonkey
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Posted: 15 August 2005 at 10:10am

Great style and an interesting warped perspective... this has a lot of potential.

The bush size around the walk is the only thing bothering me. The bushes that are closer to us should be larger than the ones further away.

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TACW
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Posted: 15 August 2005 at 12:34pm

Looks really great. I can't wait to see it colored. )

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jujucece
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Posted: 17 August 2005 at 5:19am

For a first production, it's very nice...
But I don't like the Ctrl+C Ctrl+V for the trees...

I want to see it colored !

Jujucece

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dcontell
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Posted: 17 August 2005 at 7:58pm

Update:

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zi-double
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Posted: 18 August 2005 at 1:48am

watch roof ...

in back side in lover corner he finish with vertical line and that isn't good for ballance of the picture

another what I can understand is two horizontal lines one of the roof and one of the wall in left part of building ... they have very very different direction ?

as entity ... very interesting and I hope to see this with colours :)

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:) GDGB :)

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TACW
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Posted: 18 August 2005 at 5:01am

Question, does any picture have to ever look right I mean look at thousands of cartoons and movies out there. Some look like hell and still make crazy money while others that spend alot of time get nothing. Some Artist have their own style.. And this style I like. ;)

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zi-double
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Posted: 18 August 2005 at 7:11am

just show my idea

I think the roof must be more down after my correction than he will more interesting ...

... and I think for straw roof or something handing on the end of roof :)

excuse me for my try dcontell !!!

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:) GDGB :)

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dcontell Seaman Joined: 09 April 2005 Location: Brazil Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Topic: My First Line art Posted: 14 August 2005 at 6:51pm
	my first lineart to be colored. Is the oak's lab. of prof.
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Moonstrider Seaman Joined: 08 August 2005 Location: Norway Online Status: Offline Posts: 25	Posted: 14 August 2005 at 7:05pm
	Looks pretty good. Maybe you could have a bit more details on the windmill thing. And it looks a bit odd, like its out of perspective or something... But things are generally a bit skewed so it may be a style issue too.
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SplatPixel Seaman Joined: 23 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 17	Posted: 14 August 2005 at 8:01pm
	bet this is gonna look amazing when you add in some color. i like the perspective on this, very nicely done.
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 15 August 2005 at 10:10am
	Great style and an interesting warped perspective... this has a lot of potential. The bush size around the walk is the only thing bothering me. The bushes that are closer to us should be larger than the ones further away.
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TACW Midshipman Joined: 07 July 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 60	Posted: 15 August 2005 at 12:34pm
	Looks really great. I can't wait to see it colored. )

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jujucece Midshipman Joined: 06 July 2005 Location: France Online Status: Offline Posts: 60	Posted: 17 August 2005 at 5:19am
	For a first production, it's very nice... But I don't like the Ctrl+C Ctrl+V for the trees... I want to see it colored !
	Jujucece
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dcontell Seaman Joined: 09 April 2005 Location: Brazil Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Posted: 17 August 2005 at 7:58pm
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zi-double Commander Joined: 05 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 277	Posted: 18 August 2005 at 1:48am
	watch roof ... in back side in lover corner he finish with vertical line and that isn't good for ballance of the picture another what I can understand is two horizontal lines one of the roof and one of the wall in left part of building ... they have very very different direction ? as entity ... very interesting and I hope to see this with colours :) ========================= :) GDGB :)
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TACW Midshipman Joined: 07 July 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 60	Posted: 18 August 2005 at 5:01am
	Question, does any picture have to ever look right I mean look at thousands of cartoons and movies out there. Some look like hell and still make crazy money while others that spend alot of time get nothing. Some Artist have their own style.. And this style I like. ;)

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zi-double Commander Joined: 05 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 277	Posted: 18 August 2005 at 7:11am
	just show my idea I think the roof must be more down after my correction than he will more interesting ... ... and I think for straw roof or something handing on the end of roof :) excuse me for my try dcontell !!! ========================= :) GDGB :)
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