Shoulders are too wide indead.

Mods of PJ, isn't it time to improve that message to something understandable?

It means that too many people voted NO for gallery inclusion. I voted a NO for it too.
Indeed it is mostly the anatomy. I suggest you go to www.posemaniacs.com and look up this pose there. Than compare and redraw by realistic sizes. Her stomach is really narrow, her hips too wides, her legs contain holes where normally knees are, her shoudlers are wide, I can hardly see elbows,one of her feets is rotted while the leg is not.

Thats what I notice first.
However, now that you are here it would be cool if you took the time and improved the colors together with us too :). But first the anatomy.
I hope I can be of a help!

Lollige

How about no?

There's already a "didn't get a high enough score" message. Stop confusing people.

edit:

Read 1 and 10 respectively. FAQs, they're good for you.


ZeroNova, you're doing fine, keep up the high spirits.

Might want to slim down her legs a bit.

it looks to me like the knees are too high(the femur, or thighbone is generally longer than the calve bone) and I think that the sleeves stick up too much, making her already wide shoulders look kind of manly It doesnt really seem to me that this type of fabric would stick up at all, really. The left foot looks like shes standing on her tippy toes which would shift the weight of the entire body and make her lean right. The right foot isnt really in a possible position with the legs as they are. If the foot was like that, the whole leg would turn. I think the arm position makes her look kind of stiff and awkward too- I think it is a more natural position for the arms to be a lot closer to the body, although this position is definitely  achievable. You also have multiple light sources that dont agree with each other. The legs are shaded as though there is light coming directly on top of them, which would mean the shadow would be almost non-existent. You also have very frontal shading on her stomach which gives a pillow-y effect. One more little thing I noticed...You wouldnt be able to see the lines marking the underside of her breasts when she's wearing a dress- I'd suggest looking at a picture of a woman wearing a tighter wifebeater for help shading that area.