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PATBUTCHER
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Quote PATBUTCHER Replybullet Topic: New pixel art C+C welcome
    Posted: 19 April 2009 at 5:04pm
Hi, this is actually first post/pixel art ever. props for telling me how to upload. tried this pixel art b4 with to much thinking but working in an office gives me hours to contemplate my next pixel. whaddyatink?

ps. i love the old demo scene and  probertson, dont be a hater
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Quote Mabelma Replybullet Posted: 19 April 2009 at 5:54pm
I like it but the outline is a bit jagged. The shading on the face is awesome but shading on the other places are a bit bad. I tried fixing the outline of some of the problematic places. I think it's ok but really need some work. Also the crown has too many colors.

Hope you don't mind I edited it. I know it still needs some work. Also why doesn't the right hand/left hand has no shading?Shading is jagged too.


Edited by Mabelma - 19 April 2009 at 5:59pm
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Quote JosephSeraph Replybullet Posted: 19 April 2009 at 6:17pm
Why recent Pixels are all giving me the creeps?!
Anyways, i don´t like much the texture of the chair, i think it has to do with tha 'white' but i am not sure..
OH, redirect the chair feet lines, because they´re on an almost perrfect angle...
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Quote PATBUTCHER Replybullet Posted: 20 April 2009 at 10:46am
hey thanks! im gonna go ahead and get the composition together b4 i colour or fix anything
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Quote God_Is_Evil Replybullet Posted: 21 April 2009 at 12:36pm
Hey patbutcher i noticed that your shading was a little odd.

So here i did a edit.



I did it as fast as i could but i just wanted to show you something, The shading on your dudes arms is coming from more than one direction.

And when your choosing gold colors make sure your highlights have enough contrast to be discernable.

Checkout this pic with great looking gold.

http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/25148.htm

Here are the colors he used to make that gold.

If you look at it up close you can see that it is almost all brown
and orange. Then the color right under white is yellow and you
can still see the white clearly when it's on the yellow.


EDIT::

lol i just read the post saying that your gonna work on the comp then work more and the shading....
Well whatever.


Edited by God_Is_Evil - 21 April 2009 at 12:37pm
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