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Vesper
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Quote Vesper Replybullet Topic: Princess Jasmine
    Posted: 10 June 2009 at 5:46pm
So hi, first time around here. I've been spriting for a few weeks now but I've failed to finish anything. Tonight I got an inspiration and decided to make a sprite of Princess Jasmine from Aladdin.

My favourite princess (don't laugh).

Took me a good while to get there but I think it was worth it.


Anyway, I'm here to ask for constructive criticism. I already acknowledge some problems but I'm having hard time fixing them. Her pose looks a bit awkward (she's supposed to be sneaking around). Any suggestions on how I should fix it? By the way, that's the lamp she's holding.

Cheers!
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Quote chloe-whatever Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2009 at 7:20am
Only one thing that scares me: no pupils in her eyes D:
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NotlikeTheOther
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Quote NotlikeTheOther Replybullet Posted: 17 June 2009 at 10:11am
I think you did great.. her eys do look strange, maybe a darker shade? They look too red right now. Also, I got her posture was to be sneaky.
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