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Quote Game & Watch Replybullet Topic: Speedy the Tortoise
    Posted: 21 June 2009 at 2:18pm
I wanted to make myself an avatar of my tortoise, Speedy, and here's the current result:



He ended up being a bit bigger than I intended, so I made a cutout to use for avatar.
Any cc before I upload it?
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Quote Peach Replybullet Posted: 22 June 2009 at 5:35am
some small things I would improve on this: contrast above everything, and a little bit of AA wouldn't ruin anything ;)
apart from that, I don't get the black used in the small version. what's for?
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Quote Game & Watch Replybullet Posted: 22 June 2009 at 9:01am
Okay, added some contrast! Is this enough?


I don't really know why I added the black in the small picture either...

Do you think I should anti-alias around the edge?
I added a black outline here, don't know if I will keep that.
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 22 June 2009 at 10:16am
FYI, when you have an active WIP thread and at the same time submit the art to the gallery queue, very few will bother with c+c since you've essentially closed it.
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