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Riku 123q
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Quote Riku 123q Replybullet Topic: One Piece Base
    Posted: 16 August 2009 at 6:32pm


C&C?

I would prefer edits more than anything..So I can get a visual version of what should be fixed.
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Quote A.B. Lazer Replybullet Posted: 17 August 2009 at 8:01am
- Neck is too long
- eyes are too close to each other.
- Too dark color on torso compared to legs.
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 17 August 2009 at 11:52am
- waist is too low
- needs shoulders
- aa isn't working
- neck is too thin (no trapezius muscles)
- pectorals too square
- head misshapen in several ways

Best thing to do is use references, follow them (taking note of proportions and comparative sizes, as well as muscle shape and placement). Even if it's a small, cartoony sprite, you need to know human anatomy fairly well.
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