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bonehead11
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Quote bonehead11 Replybullet Topic: Suffering
    Posted: 20 December 2009 at 1:52pm
Hi all. I havent pixelled in eons, but I had great urge to create something, I was really down,hit the bottom of bottom, everything happened was only bad to worse, only suffering and pain, its really hard to express... Everyone has his shadows and problems, I wont be writing down what happened, I think its not appropriate forum for it. So Its kinda personal and I want to make it really good so throw it in me.
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Quote Manupix Replybullet Posted: 21 December 2009 at 2:51pm
Looks like he's at the bottom of a pit? Is that the opening at the top?

If so, the persp is off, it looks like the opening is horizontal; at least the image should be taller with more distance btw top and bottom.
Also, light could be much more contrasted, leaving most of the guy and rocks in shadow.



Also, the green on the shorts is a distraction, unless you plan for other colors around. I'd stick to a very low-sat palette.






Edited by Manupix - 21 December 2009 at 2:55pm
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