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Quote Denmen707 Replybullet Topic: Sunset Scene
    Posted: 05 January 2010 at 12:26pm
it's a scene based on the Box art of Settlers of Catan

C&C please
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Quote meagz Replybullet Posted: 06 January 2010 at 1:10am
crop it to square format?
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Quote Denmen707 Replybullet Posted: 06 January 2010 at 7:02am
anything else?
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Quote DrunkBurger Replybullet Posted: 06 January 2010 at 7:33am
Well, i dont know if you want to have color restrictions but if you don't have any...then i would add way more detail. And i mean waaay more detail.

Right now you can't really comment on it because everything looks fine as it is. But there is always room for improvement.
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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 06 January 2010 at 9:21am
git sum AA up in thar. and get a better layed out colour palette.

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Quote Denmen707 Replybullet Posted: 06 January 2010 at 10:25am

AA added
cropped the hell out of it
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Quote meagz Replybullet Posted: 06 January 2010 at 2:24pm
maybe keep the sun in the centre, or crop to one side of it... just looks a little off balance
AA is looking good :)
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Quote A.B. Lazer Replybullet Posted: 06 January 2010 at 2:53pm
It seems that houses are walked on the top of the hill to watch sunset...
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Quote meagz Replybullet Posted: 06 January 2010 at 4:26pm
and maybe add a few pixels to the ground on the left, make the horizon all flat
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Quote Denmen707 Replybullet Posted: 07 January 2010 at 9:22am
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Quote meagz Replybullet Posted: 10 January 2010 at 5:11am
yes!

looks good. crop one or two pixels off the left size so its the same as the right, and then maybe some AA on the clouds or no AA on the houses (like in your first post)?

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