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Hapiel_old
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Quote Hapiel_old Replybullet Topic: Avatar portrait
    Posted: 29 January 2010 at 6:42am
Hi guys,

I needed something I could use as avatar, what do you think?



Thanks in advance!


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Quote Hapiel_old Replybullet Posted: 30 January 2010 at 1:45pm
I have made some detail changes, color changes, and created different versions for use in other profiles: 50, 100 and 128. The 100 and 128 are modified so that there would not be any 'ugly' pixels around.

                               
                                   




Any suggestions about what I could change to improve it more?




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Quote kenpokis Replybullet Posted: 30 January 2010 at 8:42pm
I think you could use some more contrast in the hair. Highlights and make the individual strands stand out. The right cheek (looking at it) seems a bit too flat, but maybe it's just me. Also the smile seems a little off. Maybe bring the upper lip down a bit. I'm no expert, so you should probably get some more input. Hope i'm helping.
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Quote Hapiel_old Replybullet Posted: 31 January 2010 at 2:22pm
Thanks for the reply!



I agree the lips look a bit awkward, so I played with them a bit more. It resulted in the jaws being raised to compensate for the less open mouth.

Also I have moved the right eye and changed the colors.

Thanks again for your opinion, I think I will be submitting it as it is!

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