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Hi guys, a portrait for the challenge:

What do you think? what can/should I improve, and what would be your visions on something like this? Please tell/show me, id love to learn ;)

The yellow numbers remind me of how many colors I have left in each part, I wished I had more left in the bottom right corner :(.. (so I can do one color extra for the scarf, and keep the extra color for the eye)

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Edited by Hapiel - 05 March 2010 at 1:34am

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Hapiel_old Seaman Joined: 29 January 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11	Topic: Challenge portrait Posted: 03 March 2010 at 3:15am
	Hi guys, a portrait for the challenge: What do you think? what can/should I improve, and what would be your visions on something like this? Please tell/show me, id love to learn ;) The yellow numbers remind me of how many colors I have left in each part, I wished I had more left in the bottom right corner :(.. (so I can do one color extra for the scarf, and keep the extra color for the eye) NEW VERSION Edited by Hapiel - 05 March 2010 at 1:34am
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Robinhood Commander Joined: 18 May 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 245	Posted: 03 March 2010 at 3:04pm
	Scarf definitely needs moar detail. Use that extra color in the bottom left to AA and add more shadings. Get rid of a skin color on bottom right so you can use the color from bottom left to also AA and more detail. :D Background shouldn't be visible where the hair parts at his forehead. What's up with the pinkish line things at top and left? Backgrounds a bit plain, but its looking good ;)
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Hapiel_old Seaman Joined: 29 January 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11	Posted: 05 March 2010 at 1:33am
	I really have no idea what to do with that scarf.. I might need to get rid of it, but then I have to think of another way to make this thing interesting after all.. Why do you find AA so important? AA is in my opinion only possible if I have a color that is already there anyway.. I now have 2 spare colors in the bottom right corner, and I am not sure yet where I need to go with this. Any suggestions?
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