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Quote Conjested angel Replybullet Topic: What did I do wrong? Need help
    Posted: 14 March 2010 at 6:16pm
Made this during the olympics, but I guess the edit is a little late
This Got rejected
Need ideas for improvement
Need C+C so I can get it into the gallery
Note: When I submited it, the red was transparent
sorry for repostin gbut no one answered and it still got rejected
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Quote Uriah Replybullet Posted: 14 March 2010 at 6:25pm

What exactly are you trying to do here? All I can say atm is that fix some of the clouds, they look pitiful.

I like the flags =]
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Quote slasher Replybullet Posted: 17 March 2010 at 9:36pm
My guess is that it is a big image with only a small section being used. Maybe you could reduce the size of the work? You may want to just focus on the grandstand for this submission.

Regarding the two checkered flags, you could introduce a general wind direction to show how to flag is being blown. Otherwise, make it look hanging down like the flag on the grandstand.

This looks good so far just that a little colouring at the curved section of the grandstand would be better. (Shading and lighting can be done later)


Edited by slasher - 17 March 2010 at 9:38pm
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Quote Minstrel Replybullet Posted: 18 March 2010 at 1:17am
Basically - unclean lines (checkered flags), unclear perspective, loads of empty space, wasted colours (the rings).

Try to sketch it out on paper first. If you can't get it right on paper, then you should try a less challenging angle.
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