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Simple City

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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Topic: Simple City
Posted By: JWM
Subject: Simple City
Date Posted: 24 May 2010 at 10:42am
I've been working on this piece for about 5 hours total, but that was broken up over a series of days and weeks.



What do you guys think could be improved on?

Thanks

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Posted By: dpixel
Date Posted: 03 June 2010 at 2:02pm
How about some trees, parks and building signs.  And be more creative with the building architecture.

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Posted By: jhalmuri3521
Date Posted: 04 June 2010 at 5:13am
Hm it is also nice

However You can add few roads and passerby

you can also add tree, park, and swimming pool.........

when you will done it please show us

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Posted By: JWM
Date Posted: 13 June 2010 at 5:54pm
Okay I have an update. I'm having trouble working on a swimming pool. What do you guys suggest I can do to get the pool looking right?

I also edited a lot of windows on the buildings so they're not the same on every building. I added a few more people, and I added some more sidewalks and added some details to those sidewalks as well.



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Posted By: jalonso
Date Posted: 13 June 2010 at 8:13pm
The light blue line on the pool should be the top highlight not where you have it.

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Posted By: Momotaro
Date Posted: 15 June 2010 at 5:59am
The light lines on the edges of buildings should b darker.
It's pretty good, but it needs more action. Maybe a helicopter, some cars, an explosion, etc. etc.


Posted By: JWM
Date Posted: 18 June 2010 at 11:56am
Originally posted by jalonso

The light blue line on the pool should be the top highlight not where you have it.

Originally posted by Momotaro

The light lines on the edges of buildings should b darker.
It's pretty good, but it needs more action. Maybe a helicopter, some cars, an explosion, etc. etc.


Thanks for the feedback, guys. The lines being darker, did you mean the darkest, or just a slightly darker shade?

Thanks

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Posted By: Momotaro
Date Posted: 19 June 2010 at 12:39pm
The top edges should stay the same, but the edge facing the viewer should be slightly darker.



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