Penguin WIP
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 15 June 2026 at 10:35am
Topic: Penguin WIP
Posted By: Rerg
Subject: Penguin WIP
Date Posted: 15 July 2010 at 12:21pm
Return to Pixel Art! Feel free to give me any comments. Thanks. P.S I am also known as Dielas on Pixelation |
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Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 15 July 2010 at 3:06pm
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wings look huge. google reference of penguin. the body in general is quite small in relation to the head. Personally I thought the first pose, where the bird was bending to drink or something, had the most potential- it just needed work. One problem you have is that you didn't start out with a clear idea of the anatomy of the creature you wished to make, so you had no "thesis" to guide your work. as such, the anatomy is rather abstracted. you should solidify your goal, perhaps even through sketches, if you want the best results. as it is it feels big and stiff, penguin wings are kinda stubby, but still pretty graceful and hinge at a few places. the poses are also a bit dull, the animals seem sullen and portray no strong emotion or attitude. |
Posted By: Rerg
Date Posted: 16 July 2010 at 10:08am
 An update, looked at what Cure said, gave him a family, new colors. Still WIP especially his chesticles. Thanks |
Posted By: Rerg
Date Posted: 16 July 2010 at 5:59pm
 UPDATEEZ |
Posted By: Rerg
Date Posted: 17 July 2010 at 2:16pm
 UPDATEE |