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unfinished guy

Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 11 September 2025 at 9:59pm


Topic: unfinished guy
Posted By: Bear
Subject: unfinished guy
Date Posted: 09 April 2005 at 5:04pm





i started working on him like a hour ago, i haven't named him yet

c+c please :D



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Posted By: Monkey_man
Date Posted: 09 April 2005 at 7:56pm
very cool reminds me of something from a final fantasy thing very nice just work add a lil bit more shading on him and hes Good in my book

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Posted By: pixelblink
Date Posted: 09 April 2005 at 8:28pm
maybe some more highlights to give him more definition and texture

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Posted By: Monkey_man
Date Posted: 10 April 2005 at 12:10pm
Yeah you should put more detail into the hair and the shirt and arms then it should come out looking pretty nice.

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Posted By: Bear
Date Posted: 10 April 2005 at 1:50pm
i posted the finished version :D


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Posted By: guzu_ligo
Date Posted: 11 April 2005 at 10:05am
I like that pose. I would suggest fixing his left foot though. It looks small and a little off balanced.


Posted By: Bear
Date Posted: 11 April 2005 at 12:52pm
yeah i need to fix that, i'll proly do it tonight :D

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Posted By: PixelPusher
Date Posted: 12 April 2005 at 10:25am
I like the lineart, but it's anatomically wrong. His left leg is shorter, and his left foot is smaller. Also, his pose looks very uncomfortable, not natural. If you want a more fluid pose, make the sword shorter(I hate to say it, but yes you'll have to).
His right arm seems slightly longer than the other, I don't know if this is true.

The coloring is weak. You need contrast, and although I don't know the color count, it seems like you have used alot. The originality of the character is lost in your coloring.

Good work though, keep it up!


Posted By: Bear
Date Posted: 12 April 2005 at 12:52pm

worked on some shading, and for the heck of it i put cloud in there

 



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Posted By: Monkey_man
Date Posted: 12 April 2005 at 2:01pm
sweet the one with the CLoud FF7 one looks sweeter then the Brown hair i think just cuz i luv cloud lol but yeah better shading Gj

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