{WIP}Sexeh Lady
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 07 September 2025 at 3:28am
Topic: {WIP}Sexeh Lady
Posted By: Delko
Subject: {WIP}Sexeh Lady
Date Posted: 01 December 2010 at 10:46pm
 Still very WIP; for a school project. Referenced used
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Posted By: Delko
Date Posted: 02 December 2010 at 12:56am
 Doin work.
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Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 02 December 2010 at 8:30am
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no crits so far. it'd be easier to crit if we had the reference though, and easier to edit if it was at 1x looks great |
Posted By: Sai
Date Posted: 02 December 2010 at 10:28am
| The rear end is looking a bit unnatural and her back looks too elongated. Is this woman supposed to be thin/bony or busty/curvy? |
Posted By: Delko
Date Posted: 02 December 2010 at 3:33pm
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Reference: http://img530.imageshack.us/img530/3692/1290747757735.jpg NSFW and Large Im not going for a 1:1 copy, trying to stylize it a bit. The back is definitely too long; im currently working on that. Her butts a lil too small too |
Posted By: Sippy_Cup
Date Posted: 02 December 2010 at 4:57pm
| i think the left cheek is a little to big, maybe it peaks a little high, even just a pixel.. i cant really find anything that jumps out at me, GREAT work! |
Posted By: Delko
Date Posted: 02 December 2010 at 6:27pm
 red lines gone finally, still got a lot of touchups and finishing to do. her face is is a lot rounder than in the reference, but I think ill leave it, I sort of like it better. |
Posted By: jeremy
Date Posted: 02 December 2010 at 7:38pm
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Face is great. The arm, buttcheek and thigh lines are really banded though, try using an unbroken outline :) |
Posted By: Ambient
Date Posted: 02 December 2010 at 7:58pm
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The hair needs a ton more highlights. Right now it's a bit bland, and absent of contrast or anything really. Her underwear is a lot more transparent in the reference too. Also the strap going around her leg isn't curved enough to show depth in your image. The curve leading to that strap is a bit iffy, too much like a rational graph.
The anti-aliasing on the hair is a bit sketchy at the bends. On the right you only really have 3 slopes, which don't blend together well if you look close. The left is similar, but less noticeable due to the hand at the moment. |
Posted By: Delko
Date Posted: 02 December 2010 at 8:42pm
Think for all the input, its been spot on so far guys. Current version. |
Posted By: ellie-is
Date Posted: 03 December 2010 at 4:37pm
| Lovely work on the skin, don't dig the dithering on the clothes a lot though. |
Posted By: Delicious
Date Posted: 03 December 2010 at 5:14pm
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Looks very nice so far! |
Posted By: Delko
Date Posted: 03 December 2010 at 6:34pm
| Nah, its gotta be greyscale; The project calls for me to paint this sucker, pixel by pixel; so the less colors I have to mix the better. |
Posted By: ChrisButton
Date Posted: 03 December 2010 at 8:07pm
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You're right she is sexy. My only complaint would be the cut off lines.
Reminds me of that famous sculpture without arms.
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Posted By: ChrisButton
Date Posted: 03 December 2010 at 10:17pm
| Oh, and I like the dithering on the clothes - it gives it texture. |
Posted By: A.B. Lazer
Date Posted: 04 December 2010 at 12:53pm
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What kind of school project is that?
Looks nice so far. |
Posted By: Delko
Date Posted: 04 December 2010 at 4:21pm
| Chuck Close Study |
Posted By: jeremy
Date Posted: 04 December 2010 at 5:15pm
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If it's his post-event work, shouldn't you be doing "pixels with outlines"? Here's a http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/39101.htm# - couple of http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/39083.htm - pieces which use that. |
Posted By: Delko
Date Posted: 04 December 2010 at 5:56pm
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The minimum size is 30x40 with 1 inch squares for pixels, Im not confident enough in my painting abilities to do anything more than solid blocks, and the project only calls for grayscale, so im not going to make it harder on myself than i already have. Plus I dont have all that much time. |