SO I'm improving of an older piece of mine.
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Topic: SO I'm improving of an older piece of mine.
Posted By: theguy
Subject: SO I'm improving of an older piece of mine.
Date Posted: 13 February 2011 at 9:27am
As the title says, I'm remaking my old 'Death' piece. I suppose because I like it even though there are a few problems with it. Anyway: also for comparison purposes:  I'll redo the fading of the cloud with a stylised dithering but I wanna make sure everything else is good first. |
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Posted By: theguy
Date Posted: 14 February 2011 at 7:47am
So I took away the clouds and... I might put them back but I dunno, suggestions? |
Posted By: skeddles
Date Posted: 14 February 2011 at 8:33am
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I'd give the hood a more droopy shape, speshly at the bottom. The clouds were a good idea but didn't look that good. If you can find a way to execute them then put them back, otherwise leave it. They should be more intertwined with the rest of the piece. ------------- |
Posted By: tanuki
Date Posted: 14 February 2011 at 10:00am
what do you think of this crappily done edit?
The clouds might look nice clinging to him. Maybe swirling slightly. |
Posted By: cassiechihuahua
Date Posted: 18 February 2011 at 10:20pm
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I'm not the best at pixel art, but I kind of like the thought of mixing your original idea with the updated version, sort of like he is standing in a thickish fog that is wafting around him.
I did a super quick(like a couple minutes) thing to show you what I ment. kind of to have it aroung him/overlapping him slightly:
 (I didn't edit out what Tanuki put in your update I now realize it looks a bit confusing xP)
but I also sort of like what Tanuki did which sort of looks 'fumey' like hes a block of dry ice with smokey stuff emmiting off of him. although at parts, it sort of looks more like smoke, as if he was moving foward/slashing his sickle around quickly.
but good luck with the piece. I like it, its neat and dramatic.
edit: changed the wording..I did this edit thinking Tanuki was the OP posting an update. didn't pay attention. sorry to edit on you edit.
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