LineArt (WIP) Updated
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 28 October 2025 at 2:21am
Topic: LineArt (WIP) Updated
Posted By: Fugitive
Subject: LineArt (WIP) Updated
Date Posted: 05 December 2005 at 1:58am
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I could do with some C&C on this line art...
Thanks |
Replies:
Posted By: inkspot
Date Posted: 05 December 2005 at 7:06am
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Lose the sharp edges. I cannot say anything else for this simplesness, sorry.
Oh, one thing, the guns are oval? If you wanted the guns to be round symetrically, then the oval should be placed verticaly. I just haven't seen anyone making oval guns as this... |
Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 05 December 2005 at 7:27am
I know it's not very good  But it's only my first attempt... 
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Posted By: Lozzoling
Date Posted: 07 December 2005 at 7:41am
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the guns look wrong, like oval on circle...is that deliberate? ------------- |
Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 07 December 2005 at 8:54am
| try not to make it so blocky also, use curves. |
Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 07 December 2005 at 9:25am
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I'll do that... |
Posted By: Pixel_Outlaw
Date Posted: 07 December 2005 at 10:16am
Yes, make some dynamic whing swoops , at the place where the wings attach to the body, there would be alot of turbulance. Also make a joint for the lego windshield. ( that's not a bad thing really)------------- http://www.shmup-dev.com/forum/"> 
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Posted By: Shark
Date Posted: 07 December 2005 at 10:53am
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yeah give it some scoops and indents and panels, try colouring it
aswell for outlaws spaceship collab :D |
Posted By: Fugitive
Date Posted: 12 December 2005 at 4:09pm
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Originally posted by Shark
yeah give it some scoops and indents and panels, try colouring it aswell for outlaws spaceship collab :D I'm try.. but it never looks right to me |
