[WIP]Help finish [closed]
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Topic: [WIP]Help finish [closed]
Posted By: Unhero
Subject: [WIP]Help finish [closed]
Date Posted: 11 May 2011 at 11:16am
Please help to finish, face and shadows   p.s. for admins, this topic can be closed |
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Posted By: dpixel
Date Posted: 11 May 2011 at 12:34pm
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Your avatar looks pretty good. Why not use that approach?
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Posted By: Unhero
Date Posted: 11 May 2011 at 12:38pm
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Originally posted by dpixel Not obtained draw the female body Your avatar looks pretty good. Why not use that approach? p.s. sorry my bad english skill |
Posted By: Zeratanus
Date Posted: 11 May 2011 at 1:02pm
| You try it first, then we'll critique and help you as you go. |
Posted By: Unhero
Date Posted: 11 May 2011 at 10:09pm
The first attempt, slightly redrew  |
Posted By: Unhero
Date Posted: 12 May 2011 at 1:33am
Morning work, please help with shadows  |
Posted By: Unhero
Date Posted: 12 May 2011 at 11:13pm
Which better?
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Posted By: tanuki
Date Posted: 12 May 2011 at 11:35pm
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bottom bricks are better.
for shadows, just choose a direction for light to come from, and then draw shadows on the other side of the object. like this- 
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Posted By: Unhero
Date Posted: 12 May 2011 at 11:47pm
tanuki, thanks a lot
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Posted By: Unhero
Date Posted: 12 May 2011 at 11:57pm
My version of the shadows  |
Posted By: Unhero
Date Posted: 13 May 2011 at 1:08am
what windows look better? that can be added to the wall? |
Posted By: Unhero
Date Posted: 13 May 2011 at 5:39am
refresh, picture very static, tell me please, what to add?
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Posted By: onek
Date Posted: 13 May 2011 at 10:32am
heres an edit on one of ur characters ....
NOTES 1. made shoulders more narrow 2. made hips wider 3. flattened feet 4. cleaned some shapes and outlines 5. desaturated colors 6. increased contrast 7. palette clean up (reduced colors to a minimum, the color ramps are sharing colors now, instead of each color having their own set of light, medium , dark etc.... note : its almost half of ur original color count) |
Posted By: Unhero
Date Posted: 13 May 2011 at 11:01am
| onek, thank you, your variant very nice, and special thanks for you explanation :) |
Posted By: Unhero
Date Posted: 14 May 2011 at 10:46am
Please show my mistakes, especially in colors. Door and windows are not finished yet. 
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Posted By: r1k
Date Posted: 14 May 2011 at 9:52pm
| why dont you try sticking to one thing at a time? Youre not going to improve if you move on to something new everytime someone posts a critique. |
Posted By: Unhero
Date Posted: 15 May 2011 at 3:19am
| r1k, Thanks for the advice, I understood you:) |
Posted By: Unhero
Date Posted: 15 May 2011 at 10:38pm
That you add this, or removed? |