The boy depressed
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Category: Pixel Art
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Printed Date: 29 December 2025 at 11:29pm
Topic: The boy depressed
Posted By: ArthurLucks
Subject: The boy depressed
Date Posted: 29 May 2011 at 8:08am
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Hello, some time ago did this pixel art, only that
guys said he was not good. So I came to ask for help to you who are good. I would ask for help, to improve Follow the attached image. 
Give Thanks for now. And sorry for bad english, I'm Brazilian. Using google translator. |
Replies:
Posted By: Alex Pang
Date Posted: 29 May 2011 at 8:12am
| There is something wrong with his shoulders! |
Posted By: ArthurLucks
Date Posted: 29 May 2011 at 11:23am
| No more? |
Posted By: Alex Pang
Date Posted: 29 May 2011 at 11:27am
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No, he looks really nice i'ts just the shoulders that are messed up.
You are really talented so I say screw the guys. :D |
Posted By: vlad61
Date Posted: 29 May 2011 at 12:10pm
| the hair could deffinetlly use more refinement. I agree that it looks nice so far though |
Posted By: CELS
Date Posted: 29 May 2011 at 1:04pm
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I think the hidden leg looks a bit weird. Do you have a reference picture that you used? I can't quite see how his rear leg would have a natural angle. From the look of his knee, his thigh seems to be angled downward, instead of going up towards his hip. The angle of the shin doesn't match the foot either, unless his foot is very, very long. |
Posted By: onek
Date Posted: 29 May 2011 at 6:55pm
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anATomy is a bit off...
looks very constructed and doesnt show volumes very much you put too much emphasis on the muscles. they are not really connected and look like seperat shapes which makes it look almost like he has no skin... heres an edit 
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