WIP Teddy
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 18 December 2025 at 4:29am
Topic: WIP Teddy
Posted By: R.N.
Subject: WIP Teddy
Date Posted: 06 July 2011 at 2:25am
It's my first post here, so hello everyone!
I'm a newbe to pixelart, so I'd like to ask you for advise.
Namely: what could I improve in my first non-tutorial pixelart:

I wanna polish it but i'm do not know how.
Thanks in advance.
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Posted By: Scratch_and_Grounder
Date Posted: 06 July 2011 at 3:29am
Well, you need to fix several things
first is the jab. Its too sharp and soesn't look right on a bean. make it rounder
you need more contrast in the shading, and make your light source clear
the part of the bandana on his forehead isn't right either, it should be curving around the head.
otherwise it isn't too bad, after you just need to fix those 3 things and we'll see how it looks
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