Sandwich Monster
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 26 February 2026 at 2:36pm
Topic: Sandwich Monster
Posted By: xxmantisxx
Subject: Sandwich Monster
Date Posted: 15 September 2011 at 8:36pm
Not sure where to go from here... I may have to submit this early and then work on it, for the weekly challenge. |
Replies:
Posted By: PureAwesomeness
Date Posted: 16 September 2011 at 6:31pm
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You definitely need more saturation and relation between your colours. Not sure if this helps, but this is what happens when all you do is change the palette slightly and add a couple more colours to smooth it out:  You should totally add a background and some sandwich ingredients like little grape tomatoes or some meat lying beside him. Maybe you opened the fridge and caught them completely off guard or something. |
Posted By: Lathien
Date Posted: 17 September 2011 at 3:27am
| LOL I love that expression. And I agree with Awesomeness, you should put some background and a scene around him. I'm thinking you show a female sandwich like a croissant or something bent over in front of him and she's looking up at us shocked too xD |
Posted By: Qemist
Date Posted: 17 September 2011 at 6:20am
| love what pure did to the colours. Imo the sause on the outside together with the outlines need some work apart from that its really cool :D |
Posted By: xxmantisxx
Date Posted: 17 September 2011 at 9:56am
Thanks guys! Especially Pure, thanks for the edit! how's this? I'll get to work on an edit for a background. |
Posted By: xxmantisxx
Date Posted: 19 September 2011 at 11:59am
| Ah man I missed the deadline... Crap... |
Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 19 September 2011 at 8:33pm
| might as well finish the piece and upload to your gallery anyway. now you don't have to worry about rushing it. |
Posted By: xxmantisxx
Date Posted: 21 September 2011 at 1:19pm
| Good point, I'll have a background up soon. |