WIP - beat 'em up sprite
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Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 23 February 2026 at 6:15pm
Topic: WIP - beat 'em up sprite
Posted By: Brevr
Subject: WIP - beat 'em up sprite
Date Posted: 20 October 2011 at 12:15pm
Hey there Just looking for a quick critique on this sprite before I star the animations for it. Thanks in advance!
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Replies:
Posted By: Friend
Date Posted: 20 October 2011 at 12:30pm
| wow, the jeans look great. The torso and hair don't look quite as "finished", and his left fist has a slight readability issue. At first sight it looks as if his wrist and hand is bent completely backwards, and his fingers are pointing to the right. Maybe move the curl of the fist more to the center, and shape the fingers a tad so they are more noticeable and not just a small rectangle |
Posted By: Brevr
Date Posted: 20 October 2011 at 12:59pm
I touched it up a bit, but I still cannot decode on what to do for the jacket, shading wise. The jeans were a breeze to do but for whatever reason I'm stumped here |
Posted By: mase0ne
Date Posted: 20 October 2011 at 8:36pm
Here are some more ideas. I softened the outlines of the flesh and hair. I also changed the eyes up a bit - the full black lower lids seemed a bit heavy.
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Posted By: Brevr
Date Posted: 21 October 2011 at 8:47am
| Great thank you both for the help! :) |