Fish
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
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Printed Date: 03 November 2025 at 5:06pm
Topic: Fish
Posted By: AlexHW
Subject: Fish
Date Posted: 21 October 2011 at 9:54pm
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Posted By: AlexHW
Date Posted: 21 October 2011 at 10:20pm
update |
Posted By: AlexHW
Date Posted: 22 October 2011 at 2:34am
here's an update, fixed the leg |
Posted By: Damian
Date Posted: 22 October 2011 at 3:19am
| Fish on steroids! I feel his quads and calf's should be just that bit bigger to make him look more balanced. I love the tail, it almost looks like a cape or something in that essence. Again upper body looks superb and I cant find anything wrong with that. |
Posted By: AlexHW
Date Posted: 22 October 2011 at 4:12pm
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yea :) i was actually imagining it like a cape flowing.. here's an update.  |
Posted By: reis
Date Posted: 22 October 2011 at 4:52pm
| Only some details are missing near the mouth of the fish. |
Posted By: Partack
Date Posted: 23 October 2011 at 4:42am
This is awesome 
Can't really add much to the conversation, not entirely sure where you're going with this. All I can say is when I first looked at the piece I couldn't discern that the fish had a big left shoulder connected to the small arm.. I don't know why but it just didn't click and so the small arm looked like it was WAY out of place, like it was supposed to be more to the right or something.. (kinda how trogdor the burninator has an arm sticking out of its back ) (  )
then I studied it further and realised it had a bulging shoulder muscle and then the out of place arm made sense. perhaps the bulging shoulder is a little TOO bulging? which is causing the arm to look out of place anatomically? just a small suggestion submitted for your approval. Great work though. awesome colours, great anatomy, great pose, the animation is really smooth the cute smirk on the fish's face is priceless, all round good job. 
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Posted By: Hapiel
Date Posted: 23 October 2011 at 6:57am
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Well done on using magenta ;) On the tail part that is between the crotch there is a part that goes up and down 2 frames after each other (look closely, youll understand) but I assume that you will notice and fix this when you color in. For the rest this is way beyond a level where I can give proper critique :D Keep on going :) ------------- |
Posted By: HotDog
Date Posted: 23 October 2011 at 7:55am
| Great choice of colors. Love the animation |
Posted By: Christoballs
Date Posted: 23 October 2011 at 1:15pm
| it would look less odd if the fin on its head moved too. |
Posted By: mase0ne
Date Posted: 24 October 2011 at 7:18am
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^ Agreed. Are you going to animate the body, too?
Dude's been hitting the gym!
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