Weekly Challenge
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
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Printed Date: 28 October 2025 at 7:43am
Topic: Weekly Challenge
Posted By: Aastikya
Subject: Weekly Challenge
Date Posted: 17 November 2011 at 6:53am
Here is the end product. I still find problems in it but don't know how to fix. So, please help |
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Posted By: Kravvon Nar'roth
Date Posted: 17 November 2011 at 7:25am
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Originally posted by Aastikya What problems, specifically, do you see? Identifying and understanding the problems is the first step to fixing them.
Here is the end product. I still find problems in it but don't know how to fix. So, please help Off the top of my head, the grass (foreground & background) could use more contrast, and as for that black line at the edge of the road... 
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Posted By: Aastikya
Date Posted: 17 November 2011 at 8:33am
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The air blow indicators look jaggy but I find it difficult to fix.
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Posted By: Friend
Date Posted: 17 November 2011 at 10:47am
does the guy have a green shirt?? Not a good choice against the grass
when your greens have such low contrast. The hilt of the umbrella seems to be off center. I smoothed the air blow lines: Also, it is never a great idea to use neutral greys, especially with vibrant colors. it just don't look very good. |