[NPA]
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=13821
Printed Date: 25 February 2026 at 6:30pm
Topic: [NPA]
Posted By: Touching everything
Subject: [NPA]
Date Posted: 08 February 2012 at 3:51pm
I would like someone to crit before I start the final piece. :3 Like anatomy and other. |
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Posted By: Touching everything
Date Posted: 08 February 2012 at 8:51pm
I fixed it a bit, like cleaner lines so it would be easier... I guess. |
Posted By: PixelSnader
Date Posted: 08 February 2012 at 10:07pm
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Your arm is too long, and both your legs have different lengths. ------------- ▄▄█ ▄▄█ ▄█▄ ▄█▄ |
Posted By: tanuki
Date Posted: 08 February 2012 at 10:53pm
| The right/back foot needs to be turned a bit to point more towards the viewer or have the heel tilted upwards. Maybe I just need to start doing yoga again, but if you try standing in that pose yourself with your back foot flat on the ground and pointing forward you'll see and feel that your foot won't be able to stay like that for long without straining your ankle a little to do it. |
Posted By: Touching everything
Date Posted: 09 February 2012 at 3:49pm
| Okay, I'll fix that! |
Posted By: ChrisButton
Date Posted: 09 February 2012 at 9:52pm
| He's gonna fall over standing like that! |
Posted By: Touching everything
Date Posted: 10 February 2012 at 2:42pm
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So, are you saying the whole position is off?
Or his feet,leg position or just the angle of almost everything? |