Revision needed - mistake?
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Printed Date: 23 April 2026 at 2:08pm
Topic: Revision needed - mistake?
Posted By: Mngwa
Subject: Revision needed - mistake?
Date Posted: 11 February 2012 at 1:10am
Hello, I have posted picture on gallery, it has been in query for a long time and recently it wants revision because of background BG is gray to fit the gallery site, so I don't understand what's wrong. The posted image here is actually one frame of many in animation of yawning man.  |
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Posted By: jeremy
Date Posted: 11 February 2012 at 2:48am
| There are many themes people can choose from. |
Posted By: Mngwa
Date Posted: 11 February 2012 at 3:54am
| How is that related to my question? |
Posted By: jeremy
Date Posted: 11 February 2012 at 4:01am
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"BG is grey to fit the gallery site" It doesn't fit every http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixels/profile_themes.asp - theme . Your pieces are almost entirely outlined in black, so there's no reason for the background to be there. |
Posted By: Mngwa
Date Posted: 11 February 2012 at 5:19am
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I finally found how to make transparent color to fit theme, thanks for advice |
Posted By: cure
Date Posted: 11 February 2012 at 12:07pm
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personally I would have revised it on quality lines. you've got a really messy outline that jumps from 1 to 2 pixels in width randomly, the shield is jaggy, black outlines are being overused and flattening the sprite. and contrast in your palette is generally too low. those large formless feet are rather awkward as well. I've seen firsthand that you're capable of better constructed, cleaner work. |