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Warrior Line Art WIP

Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=1384
Printed Date: 11 October 2022 at 3:33pm


Topic: Warrior Line Art WIP
Posted By: Omegavolt
Subject: Warrior Line Art WIP
Date Posted: 09 January 2006 at 6:39am

Ive been working on this slowly for a couple of weeks now, but the more I do, the more I feel theres something wrong with it.  I was hoping one of you could point it out to me.  Somethings wrong with the head/shoulder area.  Any other crits you guys have would be good too. :D




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Posted By: randomblink
Date Posted: 09 January 2006 at 8:51am
The only thing I can think is that the chest is too short. If you continue on this path, his hands will hang down to his knees...

Just my opinion...


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Posted By: Filax_666
Date Posted: 09 January 2006 at 8:58am

Originally posted by randomblink

The only thing I can think is that the chest is too short. If you continue on this path, his hands will hang down to his knees...

Just my opinion...

That´s true. Also his hands are too big (comparing with his face).



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Posted By: Omegavolt
Date Posted: 09 January 2006 at 9:11am

Originally posted by randomblink

The only thing I can think is that the chest is too short. If you continue on this path, his hands will hang down to his knees...

Just my opinion...

Hmm, I see what youre saying.  My plan was to make his feet end slightly lower than the tip of the sword, which would put his knees below where hands ended.  I think the armor is whats throwing off the view, I should just chuck it and redesign it anyway, its not proportioned correctly and it looks crappy. :P

And I'll try to calm those hands down Filax.  Its hard to reference for me when my pieces are this big. ;)

Thanks for the crits.



Posted By: randomblink
Date Posted: 09 January 2006 at 9:38am
Good luck!

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Posted By: Filax_666
Date Posted: 09 January 2006 at 11:46am
Hands are always a pain  I'd sugest you to take some photos or find some reference on the web...

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