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psychedelic head

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Topic: psychedelic head
Posted By: Rayovatron
Subject: psychedelic head
Date Posted: 26 February 2012 at 9:06pm
I would like to have opinions and advices for my wip.
 
Wip:
 
Where i am:
 
Its base on my drawing:
 
Inspired by this http://boards.420chan.org/his/src/1327701148331.jpg -
thanks!



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Posted By: Rayovatron
Date Posted: 27 February 2012 at 3:02pm
Update:
what you think about the eye?


Posted By: Trick17
Date Posted: 27 February 2012 at 4:21pm
I like your drawing, but the eye is out of place in both pieces. Just look at your reference, the has has to be moved to the right. And the colors are not very psychedelic, too colorfull and happy in my opinion. Looks like colors from children's paint-box. Hm, and to the eye itself: Looks like a tiny rainbow, neither like an orb nor like a cross section.


Posted By: Rayovatron
Date Posted: 27 February 2012 at 5:49pm
I tought the psychedelic style was based on bright and happy colors? About the eye i can move it, but i dont think it needs to be moved, every skull is diffrent, i would say mine is realistic... I apreciate your comment, but just saying the colors are bad and the eye isn't right doesn't really hepls me, i would much prefer to get suggestions and tips.
Thanks anyway.


Posted By: Rayovatron
Date Posted: 27 February 2012 at 6:28pm
Update:


Posted By: Trick17
Date Posted: 27 February 2012 at 7:47pm
Oh, to be honest, I had a completely different association from "psychedelic". I searched for some pictures now and you are right, I just would suggest you to add some magenta. And I think the black is distracting, but I guess you will remove it in the end.
Concerning the eye: I would remove the eyelid and render a propper eyeball or would render the eyeball under the eyelid different, that you can see that the eye is below it.



Posted By: Rayovatron
Date Posted: 27 February 2012 at 7:57pm
What do you mean the black is distracting? Its like the main colors.
Btw what did you tought "psychedelic" meant? I week ago I was associating the word with dark/crazy/gore when it's in fact more colorfull. From what i know it comes from drug experiances (mainly LSD and magic muchrooms).   


Posted By: Rayovatron
Date Posted: 27 February 2012 at 8:28pm
Update:
what do you think about this?


Posted By: Trick17
Date Posted: 27 February 2012 at 9:05pm
I mean that it has to much black inside the head, but it's not finished according to your drawing, so it will be less in the end I guess. So just forget about this sentence 

And my first associating with "psychedelic" was the same like yours, haha
Plus I think the eye loooks better now, I like the second.
Keep it up!


Posted By: Devano
Date Posted: 28 February 2012 at 9:22am
The stem of the bong looks great. However you may want the bowl to seem a bit bit more bowlish. I think the Cone bowls are ugly. Also the bowl is far to close to the mouth piece.


Posted By: shampoop
Date Posted: 28 February 2012 at 10:07am
Maybe this could help you fill in the cracks =]


http://www.thisiscolossal.com/2012/02/anatomical-cross-sections-made-with-quilled-paper-by-lisa-nilsson/?src=footer - from here


Posted By: Rayovatron
Date Posted: 28 February 2012 at 1:20pm
Hey Super17 I heard you like magenta


Posted By: Trick17
Date Posted: 28 February 2012 at 2:18pm
Haha, yeah, nice 


Posted By: Rayovatron
Date Posted: 28 February 2012 at 6:14pm
Update


Posted By: Rayovatron
Date Posted: 29 February 2012 at 7:45pm
so?


Posted By: L_Mo
Date Posted: 01 March 2012 at 2:51am
Looks awesome. I kinda like the one on the right best, the black space between the shapes gives things a bit more room to breathe.

Now animate some crazy abstract rainbow patterns radiating out of his head!



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