Pixel Octopus
Printed From: Pixel Joint
Category: Pixel Art
Forum Name: WIP (Work In Progress)
Forum Discription: Get crits and comments on your pixel WIPs and other art too!
URL: https://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=13999
Printed Date: 15 December 2025 at 11:57pm
Topic: Pixel Octopus
Posted By: lazyjoker
Subject: Pixel Octopus
Date Posted: 10 March 2012 at 3:52pm
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Very Early, Just planning need some cc, BE BRUTAL i can take:)This is my first Draft, Establishing my lines |
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Posted By: echocharliepapa
Date Posted: 10 March 2012 at 4:42pm
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the darker tentacles are the back ones, right? they kind of look strange because they are the same size or larger than the front ones. i would make them a (tiny) bit smaller, and probably make that bottom left tentacle not quite so bottlenecked where it joins the body, and the far right one could be a little more obviously behind the one above it (like if they were overlapped a little like the ones on the other side.
also, the spots on the body should probably be a different tone from the suckers on the tentacles, maybe something a little closer to the main body color? i'd definitely like to see more once you start polishing. |
Posted By: lazyjoker
Date Posted: 10 March 2012 at 9:35pm
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Ok Update 1. Fixed up some lines, changed some colors. todo: shadowing,texture,suckers,spots(properly),nicer-cleaner lines. @echocharliepapa thanks for the advice. Im still working on overlap on right though. Eyes are weird also.  |
Posted By: H|F
Date Posted: 11 March 2012 at 10:29pm
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You have a bunch of http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=5692&PN=1 - Jaggies (unclean lines) |